[@Spiffy]

I'd just like to note you may want to elaborate more on the characters arsenal of weapons. Given that they fight entirely through weapons and gadgets as opposed to internal power, saying 'Disablying paralysis weapons' seems too short a description. Your sample post includes a rifle, for example, yet that isn't explicitly said in the CS. It's fine to have a broad arsenal but you need some detail on it or people are going to wonder if he can pull a shotgun out of his ass in the middle of a fight down the line and he has nothing in his CS to back up that action explicitly.