[quote=@LadyRunic] SO many things I can say to things in what you said. But as i shall refrain and be a decent human being. I'm sorely tempted though. [/quote] Pardon me. ? [quote=@LadyRunic] Question, shall I do the entire day or just her waking up hm? [/quote] I would rather you have her remain in the hospital. This was my fault for not clarifying, I apologize for that. You see, there's nothing wrong with your post except for you thing; a hospital would [b]never[/b] discharge a patient after they were found the night before outside the ER door, bloodied and unconscious with a chunk ripped from their neck. Not to mention I was hoping for a dramatic triggering of Alice's Vampiric desires in the hospital. (We'll figure that out.) I was thinking we take your post and shave off where she leaves and a detective comes to question her in her room thst evening, around six PM I'd say. Remember, someone else's blood was on her clothes, then there's her condition, and of course the fact that she was found outside of the ER doors half dead. That doesn't sound like an accident to me. How are you with describing and running through that day's events up to around six PM as I said and ending with a knock on the door? Remember if this isn't to your suiting or it seems dictating please tell me and we'll further discuss.