[i][@eclecticwitch]
Esperanza - Beautiful! Everything looks good, but just wanted to let you know that bills are considered toilet paper at this point. Everything is digital :) But, it might be something worth trading or keeping for memories. Up to you!

Miguel - Ah, I love seeing siblings from the get go, makes a good dynamic; same with above- paper money. Besides that looks good!

Fortuna - Wow, love this character idea! That'll be fun for you to play. I might have my pregnant character go to her for a little bit of that good ol' gender predictions. :lol Great characters all around, pleasure to have you in the roleplay- send your characters over to the bin when you're ready; in one post please :)

[@tex]

Great start!

[@Heat]

You already know boy! Get that character into the bin~

[@Gelatinous Cube]

Great start! I like his name, it sounds like a detective to me; hehe. Tattoo placement needs to be lower; this is for your banking/id. Unless you constantly wear cut off shirts :lol might be more difficult for scanning. 

[@Cleverbird]

:wub I love your character sheet. Very well done. Feel free to move her over when ready![/i]