To make sure you read the rules. Anywho, Amelia passes, easily. It's worth noting that her picture isn't showing for me, though. Your other character, Joshua, took a bit of contemplation to decide whether he passed or not. Not because the CS isn't good, it's amazing. It's more so the detail about the fact that he's already a trainer. All the characters are supposed to be new trainers, and while I did kinda [i]indicate[/i] that, I realize now that I didn't explicitly say that. That's my fault, and for that, I apologize. Now, I suppose since he's leaving all his pokemon behind, it [i]could[/i] work, however, he would have to keep it a secret that he's already a trainer. While it would make for an interesting side plot, and would work well later into what I have planned, I'm not sure how the other RPers would feel about this, since like I said, I did kinda indicate that the trainers should be new, which limited how their characters could be and all. So I'll give you two options: 1. Redo your first character sheet, or 2. Wait a day or two, and if no one objects with it, you can use that character as he is.