[@Renny] [quote=@Renny] [hider=Saishu Yoake][center][img]https://i.imgur.com/1YTZEXA.png[/img][hr][hr][/center] [b]Name:[/b] Saishu Yoake [b]Age:[/b] 70 Years. [b]Personality:[/b] Much of his past has followed Saishu to Soul Society. Most being his mannerisms, quirks, and overall tendencies from before his death. Saishu while not an overachiever is a resolved man that despises being told "he can't" do something. That hasn't changed since his death. Though it had been mostly strangled upon his rebirth. Rukongai gave him a certain edge. It made him street smart and crude, a bit pessimistic but mostly pragmatic. While being carefree can come off as lazy to his peers, he has refused to adhere to anything he doesn't agree with, which meant, yes sometimes breaks were necessary and other times they were deserved. For some reason, too much work really leaves a bad taste in his mouth. [b]Backstory:[/b] Saishu Yoake fought his ability to sense the supernatural during his time in the living. Up until he died himself and was reborn in the Soul Society. As a young spirit learning the ins and outs, he had been under the impression that dreams rarely came to those in the Rukongai. So when he was approached by a maiden soul reaper of the 12th Division he was skeptical. All his afterlife he was told soul reapers were protectors of the natural order. He felt insanely lucky just to bump into one. Even more to discover he was being scouted for his "youth and reiryoku" which was whispered to have been uncanny. Two years later and he was finally emitted into Gotei 13. Just a year later he graduated and was placed almost unanimously into the 12th Division. Where, for all his skills, he was left a regular soul reaper officer told only to refine and commune until his calling was ready to receive him. [b]Strengths/ Weaknesses:[/b] As a soul reaper in the Gotei 13 Saishu is an exemplary warrior for his age. He excels mostly at Zanjutsu and Hoho, must preferring to strike as fast and hard as possible. On the other end of the spectrum he has absolutely no skills in Hakuda and only marginal abilities in Kido. He's been told to focus more on his Kido and to give Hakuda atleast a try but he's stuck to mastering Zanjutsu and Hoho, if only to make his presence on the battlefield that much bigger. [hider=Zanpakuto] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/IBwXvNe.png[/img][hr][color=#D0D3D4][i] "How feeble my love for you is. You who is so imperfectly formed, half understood, and poorly cherished. You whose soul I share."[/i][/color][hr][/center] [b]Name:[/b] Yidrias (イドリアス, First Son) [b]Release Command:[/b] "Revolt," [b]Shikai Appearance:[/b] Upon speaking Yidrias' release command a black aura surges down the blade and up the hilt respectively. Once the energy fades a long jian, its blade shining of a cobalt material, rests in Saishu's hands. It spittles a black, white splattering aura from its double-edged blade at all times; exudes a choirs' hymn with every twist and swing. Oddly enough along with the guardless jian comes a gauntlet of the same make. On his shoulders rests a rugged, black, cowl that falls to his mid-back. [b]Shikai Ability:[/b] Yidrias is mainly a melee-type Zanpakuto that doubles his physical abilities. Saishu has discovered by communing that its abilities revolve heavily around rebelling. [b]Techniques:[/b][list][*]Techniques [list][*]Flight - Yidrias grants Saishu the ability to fly unaffected by natures' laws of gravity or friction.[/list][/list][/hider][/hider] [@jynmi88] Sorry for disappearing. I was taken on a two day excursion lol. I'm back now. [/quote] Hey! Welcome back. To be honest, was a bit worried you lost interest. So it's good to see you're still interested. As for your CS, there's a couple issues. 1. All our characters are starting off at about the same place, which will be just before graduating from the Shinigami academy. Which causes a bit of issue with your character's background since it states that he's already working in the 12th division. 2. I'm a bit confused on what your character's shikai does. I get the part about revolting, as in rebelling, and how flight would fit in, but I'm not sure how it would incorporate doubling your character's physical abilities. Is it based on revolt in some way like it increases the amount he's capable of pushing something away from him, or?......