I understand what you mean by 'shorten'. My posts may always be long as I tend to get lost in the sauce while writing, but, I'll attempt to cut down on the fat of 'pre-determined' decisions. I know I've been hitting you with a lot of those. This stems primarily from me being uncomfortable not being the only one to drive a story and from having to trust that you know to respond to everything (Which you obviously do even more than that). I'm coming around to the idea, I promise :lol
And even when I can't cut down, I'll make sure to ask some questions ahead of time when writing a post like "How would Anora react to this?" if it's absolutely necessary to include something. Though, it honestly rarely is.

I can definitely work with your definitions of her power. I'm sure I'll have some pointers but they aren't coming to mind at the moment. We'll address it later, when Anora receives a more in depth explanation of magic. 

I'm glad you do't have a limit with gore. I don't go too crazy but there are definitely going to be some very dark themes to come. Especially what she's gonna see here in the hospital soon.. 

I went through and read the profile. I have no problems with any of it, I like it when things are wholesome anyways and I've never really enjoyed writing smut. It always just felt kind of pointless. 
One question, is it not okay if other characters are in gay relationships? Like if we came across a pair like that in the story as NPC's. Just covering my bases here.