[@KiltmanBagz]

So far she is looking pretty good.  Hoping to see some 'original' characters and I am not disappointed.  Of course it isn't finished yet and I'm not accepting characters at this early date.  I like the bio though you do have some misspellings in there you might want to fix like angle instead of angel and other typos.  Might want to make the technique names pop up a little more too with something like maybe some underlining so it's easier to see right away.