[@Renny]
Alright, very cool. So, I'll mention a few things, and then you can respond with your take on that.

✣ You can remove the decimals from his length. I know it pops up when you convert imperial to metric, but we never mention decimals over here in Europe. So, '175 cm' is enough.

✣ The edited picture with frame and all was a nice effort!

✣ I recommend that you think on your character's ideology/chronicles sections and add to them [i]over time[/i]. God knows I don't enjoy writing long character sheets up front, either, but I do encourage people to revisit their sheets as much as they can—before and during the story.

✣ Can you give this 'Dreaming Archon of the Ocean' a name? Preferably something other than Cthulhu, hah. While we're on this subject, I'd like to mix Water and Poison for this Archon rather than just water association.

✣ For the combat techniques, I'll ask for you to switch blood manipulation for something else. Maybe something from the Poison element? And for the Hyrdrokinetic choice, which is fine but a little too broad at this point, I'll ask for you to choose something from [url=http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Attacks]Water Attacks[/url].


Let me know what you think about these suggestions.