[quote=@IceHeart] [@KiltmanBagz] Alright, so aside from figuring out a name for your race, and a few things to fix in the bio which would be good, the character seems great overall. With a few minor changes it will be character tab ready so consider it accepted. [@DrTwit] Hmm well I noticed you spelled [devastating] devistating but aside from the minor grammatical nitpick I don't see anything holding the character from making the jump to the character tab. Accepted. [@NacNak] I like majins and don't mind having one, though of course certain limits must be put in place. For example the [b]Power Play[/b] rule will be unusable with her candy beam attack. So after reading the bio again, I noticed you ended with her still be imprisoned, was there a reason for that? [@Chev] As for you just waiting until you can make those changes before I can decide. [/quote] Understood. I'll try and work on it tonight.