[quote=@Dusksong]
Posted up Camden's part first, since that's the one I finished. I'll get to Dana's part tomorrow, most likely.
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You weren't kidding about a [i]longer[/i] post, but if you can pump out long posts that quickly, more power to you. 

One tiny detail I noticed however. You mentioned a 'Contest Hall' in your post. Just FYI, there are no contests yet. The world is still adapting to Pokemon, and they haven't even started mass producing Pokeballs yet. We're a long way from Pokemon Contests. 

But I like your post. It really gives me a feel for Camden.