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Appearance: Skin: Pale
Hair: Short, curly, brown
Eyes: Dusty turquoise, average-sized
Height: Short
Weight: Fairly muscular
Build: Narrow

Name: Shchegelsky Tsezar Ilyich

Age:  12

Personality Traits: He is calm and wise but can be zany and lazy.

Background: He was born and grew up in a decent family in a broken community, he lived in peace until he was about 5 years old, but at that point life took a turn for the worst.

He lost his home when it was destroyed after a robbery gone wrong and was shunned. All alone he had to survive in a mad world. But with his talents and fighting skills, he managed to conquer all fears and doubts and battle the elements. This has turned him into the man he is today.

With new found pride and some happiness, he now works buying a house. By doing so, he hopes to find vengeance for the actions in the past and finally find pleasureful life he has never had.

Digimon Partners: Agumon X
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I don't even know where to start with this.  I can tell according to "3 posts in 0 days" you are new around here.  Let me start by saying it's rude to just post a character in the "Character" Section without approval or authorization for the most part.  (There are a few roleplays that run this way, but this is not one of them.)  

As for the character sheet itself, it doesn't even look like you paid any attention to the setting. Or really put much to any effort into it. The roleplay takes place in a "close future" Japan.  Your character's name definitely speaks against a Japanese origin and his backstory speaks against him moving to Japan.  Those Personality traits are rather lacking as well.  How is he "calm and wise but zany and lazy"?  I can't get a real feel on how your character would react to a situation.

His age does not fit my criteria either.  I'm looking for High School aged to late college. (Though I'm more lenient on the high end of the scale)

His background, while there, feels lacking and doesn't fit my criteria of "Please at least include what prompted them to be a hacker in the first place."  He's a twelve year old that lives on the streets, working at a better life. That's what I'm getting from the background?  While that's a fine background, it doesn't match the setting nor does it mention EDEN even once and that is the main setting of the story.  There are many more things I could nitpick, let's just start with those points.

While I'm willing to accept a second try at it, I would suggest instead that you start by looking at the Roleplays in the "Free" section of the forum.  Practice your skills there and then work up to the casual section.  As it is, I cannot accept that Character Sheet.  It is out of format and lacking many vital parts that I required of the other members of this Roleplay.