[@Altered Tundra]
Alright, awesome. I'll write some comments, and then you reconnect on them.

✣ The picture is very cool. Nice effects!

✣ There is one detail about the chronicle that I would like to change, and that is this line: "Jackson and Ifrit existed in the same body...". It sounds cool and all, but Archons would not 'possess' someone in this way (even if outright possession was or wasn't what you meant). So, instead, I'd like to change this to something like "Jackson's experiences with Ifrit made him very attractive to fire spirits". How you want to word it is up to you.

✣ The comments on the magical abilities are nice. However, it seems like 'Pyrokinetic Flight' is an application of 'Pyrokinetic Surfing', so you can remove the 'flight'-part from the links. While the speed, sliding, and leaping of Pyrokinetic Surfing is alright, I'd like to keep the flight as progression for Jackson—that is, he learns it a bit later in the story.

✣ I'm on the fence about 'Incineration'. It's good that you balanced it in the comments as being in the early, unstable stages. What we can do is to develop it over time rather than remove it altogether. Or, if you don't want to wait for that, you can go with an alternative that is a bit more low-key.

Other than that, this looks great! Post this in the character tab when you feel happy about the adjustments.