[@Prisk] 
	I've fixed all of the points you suggested.

	The line in the chronicle you pointed out was a great idea and allowed me to have a much better replacement.

	I've also removed all mentioned about the Pyrokinetic Flight and kept the focus on the surfing. 

	About the Incineration, I feel as though it's the natural progression of Jackson's abilities (specifically his Fire Stream and overall fire manipulation capabilities), so if I can, I'd love for Jackson to have it over the course of the story. Would you find it acceptable if I put a disclaimer for that one as "not yet learned (or something similar)"? As for the comments, I can replace it with a simple "TBD".