I will be honest I don't know where this story is going. Every time I think I do it changes. You seem to have a very different idea of this world and how it works than I do. Sometimes I doubt that we can meet middle. I am not a planner. I prefer to allow my characters to write their own stories. While you have a set path that you want to follow. That set idea makes it hard for me to be as creative as I would like to. I don't feel like I am contributing much. And not just because of the limitations that come with using Liz. I knew using her was going to be difficult. But I hadn't thought it would be this hard. I like the story. I like Bastian. But honestly I don't feel like this is our story. I feel like I am following along. I apologize for the spelling and grammar errors. I haven't been rushed. I guess I just haven't been paying as much attention as I should. Sometimes I catch errors. Sometimes I don't. My mind tends to auto correct and I don't always see them. I am working on it so I appreciate you pointing them out. I don't think that starting over will fix any of the problems we have. We write differently. I am not going to bluntly tell you my ideas. I won't direct the story like that. Especially in a world I don't fully understand.