[quote=@Gojiralis] I worked out more details about Piero, but I still don’t know how to feel about it. Anyone has some thoughts/advice? [/quote] - A picture of someone without the mask would probably help imagine him, - If you want "The Damn Pub" to have more effect maybe put it in bold, italics or maybe both and all lowercase? [b][i]the damn pub![/i][/b] - Perhaps talk about the repercussions of Piero not being that sociable with the group/settlement, - Maybe recount what he's done to people after the lovers' event, has he become vile towards other dam engineers? Has he hurled abuse at them, shoved them even?