[quote=@Blitz] Keep in mind, also, the idea of an antagonist for [i]both[/i] gangs. This is primarily the police. But [@Fading Memory]'s character has introduct the interesting possibility of another antagonist, which may fare going into later. At any rate, both antagonists, like the Wolves, have the capacity to kill, so, also keep that in mind. [/quote] Just wanted to clarify this section a bit - while the Lost Ones are capable of killing, yes, it definitely isn't in their top 10 ways to resolve a problem. The Lost Ones will literally do anything and everything they can before having to resort to taking a life - they value life unlike some Wolves [i]-glares at my own character, Deon-[/i]. [@Blitz] Ideas? I was hoping you could help me out on that one haha. I'm actually also unsure of what to pinpiont, exactly. So I guess at this point we'll turn this back on [@sly13]. [i]-Puts on glasses to look smart and psychiatricly-[/i] If you were to make a few changes to this particular character, what would they be and why?