[@Ollumhammersong] Concerns are good, it means things needed to be fixed even if I didn't realize it. I'll list off changes in order of noted concerns.

My apologies for missing the mark on the date, altered it so the fall of his planet (Which is now a mining world, to better fit other changes) occurred ninety years after Cadia fell, so its only a ten year gap between the current events and his lost homeworld. Does that work better for you?

In regards to equipment, the stub revolver had any mention of specialty rounds dropped, blind was replaced with frags (Noting he only ever has, at most, one or two depending on scavanging or supply luck), and the chainsword dropped completely. Instead, it was noted that mining picks were altered for battle and carried instead, though they are two handed affairs typically. Is that still considered too far, I can certainly go the knife/shortsword route if it is. Which means the only weapon of any unusual quality is the custom lasgun pattern, assuming the mining pick isn't considered unreasonable.