Reviews are in [color=ed1c24]Red[/color]. [hider=Boshu Sen'yo] [CENTER] [I]Character Theme-[/I] [URL=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4p3Tm26902E]Home at Last[/URL] [color=ed1c24]Bad title turd.[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]https://i.imgur.com/3iFNjz9.jpg[/img] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Full Name[/U]】 Boshu Sen'Yo 【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】 Hunter 【[U]Gender[/U]】 Female 【[U]Age[/U]】 24 【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】 mid 20's 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 Straight up hetero. ____________________________________________ 【[U]Village[/U]】 Iwagakure 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 Iwa 【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U] The Empire of Stone Sen'Yo Hunting Guild The Empire's Tiger Division [color=ed1c24]Good[/color] 【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】 Sen'yo clan Known and reputed as a clan that advertise themselves and operate as a guild of hunters under the remit of the Tiger Division of the Empire. They specialise in researching and subsequently slaying or warding off beasts within the Empire's territory and are sufficiently spread throughout the land in order to ensure quick response times with beasts of any kind for population control. For their work in controlling the populations of wild beasts they are compensated financially in order to maintain their equipment and afford to supply their clansfolk across the Empire and train new members of the clan. Hunter training isn't exclusive to the Sen'Yo clan itself and is open to all willing applicants, but due to the wartime period most able-bodied folk who could join were already enlisted in the military and didn't have the time in which to train how to hunt. Every once in a few generations you will find some members who have a knack for wildlife and are able to tame such beasts for their own ends. 【[U]Rank[/U]】 Official Hunter (Low-Jonin) Man-Hunter for the Tiger. 【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】 Wind (Primary) Fire (Secondary) 【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】 Boshu's uniform and attire are essentially one in the same, as a good hunter is always prepared to begin another hunt. But during times where Boshu is not found to be wearing her full hunting garb she will be in a rather dressed down version featuring a distinct lack of the layered armour plates that adorn her shoulders, waist, arms and legs, a form-fitting shirt displaying her mid-riff with shorts thigh-high socks and boots to match. No matter the attire she wears, the head-dress she wears that bares the symbol of her clan and of the Stone Empire is always a must, like the headbands of the shinobi of previous years it is the most important signifier of who she is and where she's from. Standing at a height of 167 cm, Boshu's physical appearance is fairly normal and expected of someone from the Sen'Yo clan, strawberry blonde hair, gentle eyes and a pleasant olive skin-tone, the most common physical traits found amongst the wide-spread family of hunters. Additionally she also boasts one of, if not the most, muscular form amongst the women of the Stone Empire and it is put to great use in her grappling style of unarmed fighting. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Personality[/U]】 There's joviality, there's guts, there's... A something a bit weird about how primed and ready Boshu is to get stuck knee-deep in a bad situation if someone needs a hand. But it's not a bad trait when you have the skill and might to make things go your way. Boshu often throws herself into a scrap if she can see a way of either helping someone in trouble or in splitting up a pair of hotheads who can't back down. Socially Boshu will revel with whomever is having a good time, accidentally knock the wrong person, start a bar fight and then get kicked out with the lot of them [color=ed1c24]what a cunt[/color]. Then go waltzing to the next tavern or bar with the people she just got into a fight with for another round of drinks, honestly any reason to take people out for drinks is a good enough reason for her. Outside of drinking she'll be supportive, positive, merry and can come across as naive at times with most people she meets, a persona she carries to endear herself to others. During hunts and missions for the empire, she's still relatively chipper, but a lot of her focus in on her surroundings and the safety of anyone she's working with, taking into account possible changes in the situation and trying to make an appropriate call if such a change occurs. Whilst she doesn't always enjoy hunting beasts and whatever else she is sent after, she knows that at the end of the day it's her job to do this because not everyone else is up to these kinds of tasks. Like most members of the Stone Empire she is exceedingly proud of her homeland and the things it has achieved, but she has less of a disdainful treatment of people from the other nations in order to make a good impression and show them the benevolence that the Empire has to offer as well. [color=ed1c24]i bet she'd choose dishonour for the power of friendship[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]History[/U]】 From a young age Boshu was trained in her clan's art of hunting, learning to utilise various weapons to fell beasts that roamed into the Empire's lands with ill intent. Out of all the weapons she used she showed the most promise with the bow, larger than conventional bows used by shinobi in order to provide greater penetration power against the hide of the beasts they would normally kill. Her training didn't stop there, whilst she was also training as a shinobi for the Empire she continued to learn the skills of her clan. At this point she was still too young to be enlisted into the military for the war like many of her fellow clansfolk were, the bare minimum of the clan being left behind in order to safely ensure that Wildlife populations were remaining within an acceptable level. Some of the teachings overlapped, such as tracking a target or quietly manoeuvring through terrain to gain a vantage point on the area. She put all her time into learning everything the empire and her family had to teach her and came out better for it, so much so that she became incredibly relaxed afterwards, believing that she wouldn't even need to try now that she'd learnt what she thought was everything. Most of her time after completing her training, having taken on a solo hunting task to prove her worth, Boshu was taking part in scouting operations to keep an eye on the numbers of Kumogakure's steadily crumbling army. Her lax demeanour was worked out of her work attitude by the lengthy duration of her scouting missions, moreso near the tail-end of the war when they didn't actually need to worry about the enemy forces due to all the political talks going on at the time. Regardless she found that there was much more to discover and learn from whilst out in the field. After the war with the Lightning finally ended, Boshu's primary duties as a hunter rekindled, able to take on the mantle of a Sen'Yo Hunter officially without any wars getting in the way. In recent years with a mostly controlled beast population and no enemies on the Empire's borders to worry about, she's managed to balance her relaxed, jovial nature with her missions and duties, making slight modifications here and there to her bow and the arrows she carries in order to widen her range of abilities. For the most part she's used her shinobi training to supplement her hunting capabilities and in turn puts her hunting knowledge into her missions as a "Tiger" Division agent of the Empire in co-ordination with the "Dog" Divison to track down and either capture or kill rogues who dared to abandon the Empire. During some of her hunts she has proven to be able to guide wild beasts and animals out of Iwa territory. [color=ed1c24]Simple and clear. Good story.[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Special Traits[/U]】 Excellent vision, hearing and sense of smell Affinity with animals Average Chakra pool Adept Chakra control Highly skilled archer Fairly skilled with melee and unarmed fighting Remarkable strength and endurance 【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】 [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Hunting Bow [u]Description:[/u] A self-crafted weapon, heavily used and well maintained, somewhat of a mark of pride for those of the Sen'Yo clan as it shows that they are capable of creating their own tools and also able to keep them in a good condition for a long time. It's been modified somewhat by Boshu to improve it's utility purposes. Normally it is stored in a specialised seal on Boshu's wrist. The bow is able be used as a melee weapon, not a good one but good enough to defend with or bludgeon someone. [u]Appearance:[/u] [b]That big fuck-off bow in her appearance[/b] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Explosive charges x 10 [u]Description:[/u] Ten explosive charges that can be mounted around the head of an arrow in order to explode upon impact or a set amount of time after impact - Destroys the arrow after detonation. [u]Appearance:[/u] A thin metallic cylinder that clips around the shaft of the arrow. Typically stored within a scroll strapped to her leg. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Smoke shells x 6 of each type [u]Description:[/u] Mountable shells that fit around the head of the arrows, much like the explosive charges. White shells emit a trail of smoke either upon impact or immediately after firing. Orange shells release a thick mist of orange-hued smoke upon impact that irritates the eyes and respiratory system of anyone caught in it, normally causing large amounts of pain. Purple shells release a lavender-scented mist that induces tiredness and sleep in most who are caught in it. [color=ed1c24]lets have this /not/ be too combat reliable.[/color] [u]Appearance:[/u] A shell that fits around the head of an arrow, colour denotes the smoke's purpose. For storage purposes they are stored inside a scroll that's strapped to Boshu's leg. There is a scroll for each type of shell. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Arrow quiver - stores up to 40 normal arrows. [u]Description:[/u] A quiver for arrows, not much else to it. Most arrows used in the field can be reclaimed and used for later, but having a reasonable supply on hand isn't a bad thing. An additional supply of 40 normal arrows is stashed within a scroll inside the quiver, for quick refilling purposes. [u]Appearance:[/u] Visible in character appearance. [/I] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Kekkei Genkai [/U]】 [I] [U]Name of Kekkei Genkai:[/u] None [U]Clan:[/U] [U]Rank[/u] [U]Description:[/U] [color=ed1c24]delet this[/color] [/I] ------------------------------------------------------- [I]Jutsu:[/I] [hider=Canon Jutsu] Standard academy techniques, you know the ones [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Clone_Technique]Shadow Clone Tech[/url] Enclosing and unsealing Technique [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Suppression_Technique]Chakra Supression[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Blade]Vacuum Blade[/url] - Used on her arrows more than anything. [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Fire_Dragon_Bullet]Fire Dragon Bullet[/url] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Flare [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Range:[/b] N/A [b]Nature Type:[/b] Fire/Wind [b]Description:[/b] The user generates fire natured chakra into a small ball within their hand and encases it in a shell of wind natured chakra, then it is launched into the air, where the wind chakra carries it skywards before the shell shatters and the fire chakra combusts to emit a bright light. The light burns for a few minutes in order to give a signal flare for others or just to illuminate an area. Can also be used to blind others for the sake of making an escape. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Beast-caller/talker [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] Close to far [b]Nature Type:[/b] Wind [b]Description:[/b] The user whistles and with the correct modifications based on wind chakra usage it can be used to mimic any kind of animal call that the user has heard and amplify it's volume. So long as the beast in question is within earshot of this whistle it is likely to either come running towards the user to help or make a call of it's own to warn others in the area depending on if it's a call for help or a warning for the beasts to stay away. When in close proximity to a beast it is used and maintained by the user to be able to accurately tell the beast what the user wants to tell it, for things such as calming the animal or convincing it to follow the user. It doesn't help the user understand animals, but it certainly make it easier for animals to understand them. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Illusory Flurry of Arrows [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Kyu/Genjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Range:[/b] Long [b]Nature Type:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] A simple technique that obscures the perception of onlookers, causing them to see several arrows being fired at the same time instead of just one, making it harder for whomever is being targetted to avoid being shot with ease. If used in conjunction with a smoke arrow it will make it appear as though multiple streams of smoke are being created, but the duplicates fade far quicker than the original. If someone is watching the user as they fire they can normally keep track of which arrow is the true one, this technique is best used for surprise attacks. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Sonic Boom Shot [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Kyujutsu [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Long [b]Nature Type:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] Through the use of chakra the user's body, the bow and the arrow in current use undergo heavy reinforcement to amplify the draw weight of the bow and the strength of the user in order to unleash an arrow capable of breaching the sound barrier for extreme penetration and destructive power upon the arrow impacting it's target. Typically it is used as a long-range sniping technique due to it's charge time and sheer power. [color=ed1c24]breaching the sound barrier isn't that big of a feat in the speed tier here. but, i'll chalk this up as 'an extra fast and strong arrow attack that requires charging'. that's fine[/color] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Sonar technique [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] D [b]Range:[/b] Approx 50 metres [b]Nature Type:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] A technique designed to briefly improve the user's sense of sound in order to have an accurate idea of their surroundings and what dwells within the nearby area, be it a beast or a person. Non-offensive technique. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Physical Reinforcement Style [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Taijutsu [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] Self [b]Nature Type:[/b] N/A [b]Description:[/b] A style of fighting taught within the Sen'Yo clan's hunting guild that allows users to take and deal additional punishment past their physical norms, the boost is minor compared to most physical enhancement techniques, but it's main intent is to allow the hunters to be able to safely withstand attacks from the beasts they hunt as well as grapple and handle them physically depending on their size. The reinforcement comes mainly from the user's stance, but there is a small amount of chakra usage that adds to their current physical capabilities. This style of fighting proves to be rather useful against humanoid opponents as well as unruly beasts. [/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=ed1c24]Balanced char, nothing that really needs to be changed. I like the theme. Can post in Character tab.[/color] [/center][/hider] [hr] [hider=Shinji Yuki] [center][color=ed1c24]give a theme you dunce[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [hider=Appearance][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/narutofanon/images/0/0f/Naito_Suba.png/revision/latest?cb=20150926142637[/img] [/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Full Name[/U]】 Yuki Shinji 【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】 The Iceman [color=ed1c24]really[/color] 【[U]Gender[/U]】 Male 【[U]Age[/U]】 23 【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】 Early Twenties 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 Straight 【[U]Nation[/U]】 Isle of Mist 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 Isle of Mist 【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】 Isle of Mist 【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】 Yuki Clan 【[U]Rank[/U]】 Chuuin on the verge of becoming a Jounin 【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】 Water Nature Wind Nature Ice Nature 【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】 Pretty much what is in the image, wearing a blue vest underneath and black/blue coat. His appearance includes three swords across his back. His three swords that are in the item's area. Shinji is five' nine and weighs one hundred forty five pounds. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Personality[/U]】 Shinji's personality, on a mission he is nearly emotionless, but during his down time he lets loose. He has an aggressive personality when he isnt on a mission. Likes violence, drinking, and food. [color=ed1c24]hi my name is bob, i like basketball, spaghetti and sacrificing virgins for lord Belial[/color] Shinji often is trying to find his own goal in life his purpose. Ever since the Shinobi war ended he has been used as a weapon for hire. His newest job to explore, and be a bodyguard for those who are exploring the new world made him question for the firt time what is his purpose in life, whether or not could he be something more then weapon. This gave his a new lease on life as well as he does his latest job he is going to do whatever it takes to find his answer to is own question. 【[U]History[/U]】 Shinji was born to the Yuki Clan while having to actual connections to the Yuki clan [color=ed1c24]que[/color]. His mother was a concubine with the Isle of the Mist [color=ed1c24]niiiiiiice[/color]. His father was of the Yuki clan. His father looking for a bit of comfort during the shinobi war and Shinji was born nine months later for the result of it. [color=ed1c24]very niiice sexy tiem[/color] Shinji was weird, he was born with a kekkei Genkai. The Yuki clan's Ice release, As he was born with Wind, and Water Natures. His birth and uniqueness not being truly part of the clan was used during the war made him an asset to the mist, taken from his mother at a very early age Shinji was trained to be a weapon, a shinobi [color=ed1c24]so sad :([/color]. Training with a special divsion to become a killer. Training to be ruthless within the heat of battle and show no emotions. Trained with the same type of like minded shinobi of the era of the blood mist [color=ed1c24]spooked[/color]. He is loyal to the Kiri, that loyalty was pounded and carved into his mind. His full training was cut short when the political leaders and gang leaders were killed. He was twelve years old before whatever graduation training he was set to complete, and was interrupted. The band of shinobi was broken up that created Shinji into the person he is. Shinji is loyal to the Mizukage and the Isle of Mist and swore loyalty personally to. He wanted to become a personal body guard but was denied multiple times. Shinji was denied roles into the ANBU Black OPS. [color=ed1c24]might be due to his love for food, idk[/color] Shinji saw the end of the Shinobi war and has been in a few battles himself. Often enough the mist sent Shinji off to whoever paid the mist the most. Shinji never saw a dime, of what was paid for his services [color=ed1c24]yeah, uh, he deserves that if he didn't ever stand up for himself. kiri peeps can smell weakness from a mile away[/color]. He was hired and picked enough times for his professionalism for each job he does. He was known as the Iceman a cold killer. [color=ed1c24]i cannot take that name seriously, sorry[/color] After the war, Shinji went a bit crazy [color=ed1c24]coocoo for cocopuffs[/color], as his work load increased even more. Cleaning up the leftovers of the war was a tireless task. Shinji learned about the new world over his jobs and instead of being hired as an assassin he was hired to explore and be a bodyguard for those who are going to explore the new world. Giving him a new look on life and making him question his purpose in life. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Special Traits[/U]】 Acute senses Shinji has a heighten level of senses. He can hear, smell and see better then most without dojutsu. Adept at the Silent Killing techniques Shinji implements the silent killing technique learning he is an adept as it he hasnt mastered it as. His technique of using it is far from perfect. Expert Swordsmen/Blade's master [color=ed1c24]he's your master? shit man, slave to the ICEMAN[/color]- Shinji is great at using a sword. His sword he is great at using and, he can nearly use any sword as well. He isnt a master as using a sword but he has great skills in using them. 【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】 Terrible Sense of Direction, gets lost very easily [color=ed1c24]nah, remove this. these are acquired in the RP.[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】 [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] 3 sword set, 1 Tanto, 1 wakizashi, and 1 Katana [u]Description:[/u] Three swords of differnt sizes that Shinji uses, They sit across his back a lot of the time [u]Appearance:[/u] [hider=Weapon Appearance][img]https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1ra3AHpXXXXbuaXXXq6xXFXXX1/Samurai-Japanese-Sword-Set-Carbon-Steel-Blade-3-Katanas-Wakizashi-Tanto-Real-Sharp.jpg[/img][/hider] [/I] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Kekkei Genkai [/U]】 [U]Name of Kekkei Genkai:[/u] Ice Release [U]Clan:[/U] Yuki Clan [U]Rank[/u] N/A [U]Description:[/U] [url]http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_Release[/url] ------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Jutsu[/U]】[/center] [hider=Canon Jutsu] A Ranks [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Great_Waterfall_Technique]Water Release:Great Water Vortex Jutsu[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_Release:_Ten_Thousand_Ice_Petals]Ice Release Ten Thousand Ice Petals[/url] B Ranks [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Exploding_Water_Colliding_Wave]Water Release: Exploding Colliding Wave[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Certain-Kill_Ice_Spears]Ice Release: Killing Ice Spears[/url] [color=ed1c24]treated as a B rank power ability then.[/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Water_Shark_Bullet_Technique]Water Release=Water shark bomb jutsu[/url] [url=naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_Release:_Crystal_Wall]Ice Release:Crystal Ice Wall [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_Release:_Whirlwind]Ice Release Whirlwind[/url] C Ranks [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Prison_Technique]Water Release-Water Prison Jutsu[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Clone_Technique]Water Release:Water Clone Jutsu[/url] D Ranks [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiding_in_Mist_Technique]Water Release:Hidden Mist Jutsu[/url] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Ice Release- Ice Armor [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] KG [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Self [b]Nature Type:[/b] Ice [b]Description:[/b] It covers Shinji in a plate of ice armor. Leaving jagged edges to be used as weapons off of his armor. The armor is added defense and nothing more. No physical enhancement other then more endurance then normal [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Frost Combat- [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Taijutsu Range [b]Nature Type:[/b] Ice [b]Description:[/b] Using a mixture of Taijutsu and Ice Natured enhanced attacks. Freezing the air, and what he hits. It freezes any moisture it hits and Shinju can make contact with a person he can cause frost like damage. Side effects, uses a lot of chakra and slows the user down gradually until they are stuck at a complete stop. - [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Ice Release- Ice Shark Bomb [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] KG [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Range:[/b] Mid to Long [b]Nature Type:[/b] Ice [b]Description:[/b] Using the Ice nature to create a shark made of Ice. similar to the water version, except more physical. A moving ice shark that bites onto people, or flies past someone and explodes sending ice shrapnel causing extra damage to whatever the ice shards hit. [color=ed1c24]i guess that's cool?[/color] - [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Ice Release- Ice Shadow Clone/Exploding Ice Shadow Clone [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] KG [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Range:[/b] N/A [b]Nature Type:[/b] Ice [b]Description:[/b] Using the Ice Nature to create Clones. These Clones are physical clones like the shadow clone jutsu but a bit more durable, but they are a bit sluggish. The Ice clones can explode and send shrapnel ice shards out.They try to capture and explode whenever possible. The explosion itself is just chakra based using wind chakra to cause the explosion with just air. [color=ed1c24]so frosty explosion clone. okay[/color] -[/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=ed1c24]Jokes aside, the history is a bit wank and personality weird af. I guess he's fine. I'd say maybe remove an A rank, since four starts to be a bit much. admittedly they're not that strong, but you also don't need all of them. Try to modify personality, history and handle the jutsu section and then you'd be eligible for character tab.[/color] [/hider] Posting the rest soon.