[@Lucius Cypher] Accepted! [@Zaphander] The concept of a Paladin works fine, it's great even, but I see three issues that need to be adressed before I can accept the character. [b]1)[/b] Ditch the magic. I'm fine with your paladin having undergone mental training to resist spells, but right now it's a bit much. This carries into issue [b]2)[/b] One of my criterias for appliance is that the character is supposed to be as weak as it is strong. Your paladin does currently not have any weaknesses, and is pretty strong to boot. This needs to change. [b]3)[/b] Another criteria is that the character needs to be desperate. I cannot detect desperation in your CS. Please add some.