Review is in [color=ed1c24]Red[/color]. [hider=Aragami Tsubaki][center] [I]Character Theme-[/I] [URL= https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GKfo1hm60X8]True Arbiter[/URL] [color=ed1c24]oddly fitting[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]https://4tu34.files.wordpress.com/2009/04/mushishi_00_01.png [/img] [color=ed1c24]this fc is nostalgic holy shit[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Full Name[/U]】 Aragami Tsubaki 【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】 [s]Akiyama Izuku The Cook[/s] That idiot [s]The Pebble[/s] 【[U]Gender[/U]】 Male 【[U]Age[/U]】 24 【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】 Young adult 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 Heterosexual ____________________________________________ 【[U]Village[/U]】 Formerly Empire of Stone Currently Kumo, technically. [color=ed1c24]oboi[/color] 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 Iwagakure 【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】 Kumogakure Formerly Iwagakure 【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】 The Aragami are a family of civilians, so nope. 【[U]Rank[/U]】 He was a genin when he left the Stone. Most people don't even know he's a shinobi these days. [color=ed1c24]oooooboi[/color] 【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】 Earth 【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】 Tsubaki is the kind of person who you can generally figure out just by looking at his face. A tired, almost lazy looking smile is his most common expression, and he rarely looks as if he's taking a situation seriously, even when he actually is! He will constantly have something sticking out of his mouth, as he has only recently quit smoking and needs something similar just to tide him over [color=ed1c24]cute quirk[/color]. This may be a pencil, or a piece of paper rolled into a cylinder, or any number of other things, just so long as they have the same basic shape. As for clothes, Tsubaki rarely wears anything that could be considered particularly complicated. In fact, he refuses to wear any clothes that would take more than two minutes to put on, saying he would rather spend that time actually [i]enjoying[/i] himself [color=ed1c24]shit he's a man[/color]. For this reason, he tends to stick to standard shirts and pants. [i]Maybe[/i] a jacket or coat, if he feels like living it up a bit. Of course, there wouldn't be a whole lot of colour to them, but he's pretty sure that's not that important. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Personality[/U]】 Unlike during his childhood, Tsubaki is fairly laid back and relaxed these days. One of his greatest joys is being able to enjoy a little peace and quiet, without having to worry about anything. This has been something of a rarity throughout his life, but when such a moment comes along, he won't pass it up. Overall, his philosophy involves not getting stressed over the small things, lest you miss the big things right in front of you. [color=ed1c24]his life choices dont help at all[/color] He tends to try and make friends with the people around him, even if he's not always great at it, and finds enjoyment in teasing people and getting under their skin, especially if he thinks they're too strict or uptight. However, he also knows there is a fine line between annoying someone and upsetting them, and he has a great fear of crossing that line. If he should accidentally cross it, he will go to great lengths to make up for his mistake, as in his own words, friendship is one of the big things in life. However, one thing that has stuck with him since childhood is his hatred of killing others, usually going well out of his way to avoid the act. Even when he is in battle, and at danger of being killed himself, he will go well out of his way to try and take his opponent down non-lethally. [color=ed1c24]he's a goodboi[/color] Despite his usually somewhat relaxed nature, there are a few things that will cause his personality to do a near complete 180. The first is if someone wastes, ridicules or otherwise disrespects food and cooking. Do that, and you'll be on the receiving end of an earbashing so bad the Raijin has joked about classifying it as an interrogation technique. Food is definitely a pretty big thing in life, after all. [color=ed1c24]total bumpkin feeling here, nice[/color] The second is... Well, a little more serious. This is when he thinks someone is coming close to figuring out his identity as a former shinobi of the Stone. Even though he may seem like he's acting the same on the outside, on the inside he will go into overdrive, his paranoia and survival instincts consuming his thoughts. His safety is a pretty big thing. One of the biggest, in fact. [color=ed1c24]yes pleaaaaase[/color] And finally, the third goes right back to being dumb, occurring when he doesn't have something cigarette shaped in his mouth. When this happens, he will begin to second guess himself, getting worried far more easily than usual. As it turns out, not having a cigarette or appropriate substitute on hand makes the small things in life seem [i]a lot[/i] bigger. [color=ed1c24]except the only thing that matters to him as a man[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]History[/U]】 [hider=Hider because too long] Tsubaki was born in the outskirts of Iwagakure, to a small, poor civilian family. Life was hard for someone so young in that position, as they barely had what they needed to support their family as it was, let alone an extra mouth. Still, they held strong, doing as much for their son as they could. It wasn't until Tsubaki was six years old that things began to look up. His sister, Izumi [color=ed1c24]most generic female name. may as well call her sarah[/color], had already been a shinobi for a little while, but right after his sixth birthday, she became a chuunin, and started making a name for herself as an exceptional shinobi. Tsubaki had already thought Izumi was cool, but after all her successful missions, she quickly gained the honour of becoming his hero [color=ed1c24]no sibling fights? smelling the very anime sibling relations here mmmmm, lets hope it doesn't go further[/color], and it wasn't long before he decided to become a shinobi as well. At first, his parents were worried, but they eventually calmed down after Izumi promised to watch out for him and teach him what she could. It was this that led to Tsubaki's life long dedication to the use of polearms, doing his best to replicate his sisters abilities with her spear. However, things changed once more when he entered the academy. At this point, Izumi was widely considered a full on war hero, and it was all but impossible for her to take time off, as busy as she was with the war. As he ended up at the academy, he quickly learnt that the way they taught was [i]very[/i] different to Izumi's methods. They were expecting someone like Izumi! Someone strong, assertive and courageous! Instead they got Tsubaki, who at this he was soft spoken, easily upset and too scared of annoying others to even [i]think[/i] of putting his own opinions forward. In addition to this, his teachers didn't show the understanding and patience Izumi had, with even the kindest of teachers eventually finding it somewhat irritating to try and teach him. Oh, he learnt well enough, but he was just too... passive. He even seemed to try and avoid attacking vitals in exercises, instead focussing on non-lethal attacks. This continued despite his teachers concerns that, on the battlefield, this could easily cost him his life. [color=ed1c24]total fucking pussy, deserves to revive my cyberbully meme[/color] Despite all these however, he eventually managed to pass the academy, officially becoming a genin. Over the next few months, things were almost... Well, nice. He was able to complete a number of D-ranks without coming to worry about it too much, his team and jonin sensei were actually pretty patient and friendly towards him, and there were even a few where he got to show off the only talent he had any confidence in, cooking. The only exceptions were a couple of missions where he ended up working with one Shinrikyo Nagi [color=ed1c24]welcome to the family son[/color], which he spent terrified that he was constantly pissing her off. And then one mission, his very first C-rank, changed everything. His team had been sent to help with repairs at a small village a few days journey from Iwa itself. He had actually been truly excited in the days leading up to it, not only because it would be the first time he travelled outside the village, but also because Izumi had apparently volunteered to help out as well. According to the message she'd sent, she had been given some time to rest after her last victory and deciding to try and meet him and his team on her way back to Iwa. The first two days of repairs were happy ones, as the two siblings caught up. [color=ed1c24]i sense something fishy[/color] However, the second night brought tragedy [color=ed1c24]yep[/color]. Apparently, a number of cloud shinobi had abandoned their posts in order to make a desperate, and in their eyes heroic sacrifice, striking into the heart of the empire and weakening it enough to give the dynasties a small chance of victory. Fortunately for Iwa however, they ended up running into Tsubaki's jonin sensei on the journey, as he patrolled the area around the village. The resulting battle was loud, as the jonin did everything in his power to raise the alarm while the shinobi tried to stop him. Thankfully, it worked, and Tsubaki, Izumi, and the other members of his team were quickly awoken and went to join the fight. As it turned out, the Kumo shinobi were stronger than expected, and they quickly knocked out Tsubaki and his team, leaving the two jonin to fight back on their own. [color=ed1c24]fucking fodder noobs compromising the GOOD elements[/color] When Tsubaki came to, it was to a sight he wished he could erase from his memories, but knew he never would. The ground was littered the bodies of the Kumo nin, the smell of blood heavy in the air. Amongst them lay his jonin sensei, also quite clearly dead. And only a little way from his corpse lay his sister, hand still clenched around her spear as she bled out. Unable to contain his grief, Tsubaki ran to her, sobbing the entire way, only for her to tell him that she was sorry, her voice weak. Before he could ask why, she lifted one shaky hand and gave him her spear. Tsubaki instantly realised what she was telling him to do, and tried to say no, but she insisted, telling him that there may very well be more of them, and she knew too much to let herself be captured. Realising that everything she said was true, he took the spear from her, sobbing uncontrollably the entire time. That day, Aragami Tsubaki made his first kill and last kill, a kill stain his soul forever. [color=ed1c24]yeah dont count on that one, sad shit tho :([/color] Aragami Izumi. [color=ed1c24]rip the swole jonin, dead because bad fodder backup[/color] After that, he dragged his unconscious teammates back to the village, Izumi and their sensei's sacrifice allowing them to escape with their lives. And then he ran. He ran far away from the village, from Iwa, from everything. During that battle, he had been reminded just how weak he was. A shinobi? How could he even [i]begin[/i] to think he was strong enough for that?! His incompetence had gotten his sister, his [i]hero[/i], killed! It had gotten his sensei killed! It had nearly gotten his friends killed! He couldn't face the people of Iwa again, not after this failure. It wasn't until he had passed the countries borders that he realised what he was doing was desertion, or even that he still held his sisters spear. He was a missing nin. [color=ed1c24]prepare thine anus[/color] And that horrified him. [color=ed1c24]very reasonable[/color] It was then that he came to a decision. From that day onwards, he would wander the land, learning what he could and improving himself as not only a shinobi, but as a [i]person[/i]. And one day, if he managed to actually survive, he would return to his homeland, his head held high, and redeem himself. [color=ed1c24]and he got his own timeskip arc!!!![/color] And that was exactly what he did. He travelled between all five of the great nations, learning what he can. He passed himself off as a travelling chef, befriending people across the continent, and slowly, over the years, he grew as a person, his entire outlook on life changing. Of course, he trained himself to the limits, scouring books and scrolls he came across for whatever jutsu he could find. He also went to great lengths to hide his former identity and change his appearance, even killing cells in his hair to change it from its previous brown to pure white [color=ed1c24]smurt duder[/color]. However, after a while, he found that he wished to stop wandering, and perhaps settle down for a little while. The solution to this problem, his yearning for somewhere to call home, came in a form he never would have expected. The village hidden in the clouds, Kumogakure. [color=ed1c24]insert that shit star wars meme about traitors[/color] After the war, the town was a mess, and his anger towards the nation had faded years ago. And so, he set up shop for a little while, making sure the people of the Raijins tribe had good food and doing what he could to help rebuild. He had only planned to stay a little while, but when he realised that he could truly help people there, he decided to stay a little longer. And a little longer. And a little longer after that, too. A year later, Tsubaki was a well known face in the tribe, and he had come to befriend many of the villages shinobi. This included the Raijin themselves, who had also taken a hands on approach to restoring the village as best they could. In addition to that, they were a regular customer, and the two became close friends. Eventually it got to the point where, despite the risk, Tsubaki trusted them enough to tell the the truth of his identity, as well as the story of why he left. Honestly, he fully expected the Raijin to turn on him. He was pleasantly surprised however, when they allowed him to continue living in the village as a friend and citizen. There were two conditions to this though. The first was that he was to inform all the jonin of his true identity in an official meeting. At first, a few of the shinobi he'd befriended turned on him, as along with their general anger at the empire, many of them had lost friends to Izumi specifically. However, it wasn't long before his previously established bonds with them won out over their anger, and they viewed him as a friend once more. [color=ed1c24]the power of friendship amirite[/color] The second was that he take an 'unofficial' role as a shinobi in service of Kumo. Thankfully, this second job generally involved simply working on rebuilding with the civilians and helping to feed refugees, the kind of thing he had already been doing. Occasionally however, he would be asked to help deal with bandits, or worse, shinobi from rival dynasties. His unwillingness to kill turned out to be something of a boon for information gathering, after all. [color=ed1c24]he'll torture them with ramen boarding[/color] Even during his time as an unofficial shinobi however, the main trait his friends seemed to notice about him was his belief that, despite everything, there should be peac[color=ed1c24]e[/color]. Not just between the Iwa and Kumo either, but between [i]all[/i] the villages, and even beyond that. He just wanted a world where he wouldn't have to watch the people he cared about kill each other. [color=ed1c24]peace is boring, lets make him nagato[/color] After spending two years in Kumo, the Raijin gave Tsubaki the mission of a lifetime. He was to join the expedition to the new world, under the new name Akiyama Izuku [color=ed1c24]yeaaaaah the context behind it will be less whimsical, trust me[/color]. Officially, he was a chef, sent by the Raijin dynasty to make sure the expedition had some actual [i]nice[/i] food as a sign of good faith. Unofficially though, his mission was simple. Build friendships [color=ed1c24]nice try[/color]. The war was over, now it was time to prevent it from rekindling, as there was little doubt that a third war would spell the end of the crumbling country. [/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Special Traits[/U]】 Above average chakra capacity Decent chakra control Highly skilled in bojutsu Fair amount of botanical knowledge Damn good co[color=ed1c24]c[/color]k 【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】 [i]Really[/i] doesn't like killing other people, basically refusing to do it. Goes a little crazy if he can't trick his brain into thinking there's a cigarette in his mouth. [color=ed1c24]save this spot for shit acquired in the RP[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】 [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Benizakura [u]Description:[/u] A red spear, originally belonging to his sister, the war hero Aragami Izumi. After her death, Tsubaki kept it with him at all times as a reminder her, as well as something to make sure that he never loses sight of his goals. That being said, he keeps it wrapped up in a series of bandages at all times, lest someone recognise it and figure out his identity. [u]Appearance:[/u] [img]https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ms/1/13/Gae_Bolg.jpg [/img][/i] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Cooking equipment [u]Description:[/u] Pots, pans, knives, utensils and spices. To touch them and [/i]not be Tsubaki[i] is to declare your life forfeit. [u]Appearance:[/u] Does it really need a description or picture? Look around your kitchen. Boom, there you go! [/i] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Kekkei Genkai [/U]】 [I] [U]Name of Kekkei Genkai:[/u] Lol nah he's not that cool. [U]Clan:[/U] [U]Rank[/u] [U]Description:[/U] [/I] [color=ed1c24]delet dis[/color] ------------------------------------------------------- [I]Jutsu:[/I] [hider=Canon Jutsu] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Pillar_Prison_Technique]Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth-Style_Wall]Earth Release: Earth Wall[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Hiding_in_Rock_Technique]Earth Release: Hiding in Rock [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Hiding_Like_a_Mole_Technique]Earth Release: Hidden Mole[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Flow_Wave]Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Fist_Rock_Technique]Earth Release: Stone Fist[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Section_Cane]Earth Release: Rock Section Cane[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Shadow_Clone]Earth Release: Shadow Clone[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Gun_Technique]Earth Release: Stone Pistol[/url] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Earth Release: Earth Pillar Pedestal [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Close/Personal [b]Nature Type:[/b] Earth [b]Description:[/b] The user calls a flat-topped pillar of stone from the earth. They can call this pillar from the ground beneath them to either launch themselves through the air, or to simply act as a platform so they have the high ground. They can also call it up anywhere in a two metre radius of them, to block attacks in a similar manner to earth wall, or even launch opponents away. The pillar can be summoned on a diagonal angle from the surface it was summoned from, in order to launch the user or opponent in certain directions. [color=ed1c24]cool, be sure to not have it be some instant psychic application thing.[/color] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Earth Release: Skidding Stone [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Personal [b]Nature Type:[/b] Earth [b]Description:[/b] After a run up, the user kicks up a chunk of stone beneath their feet, which they can then ride on as it skids across the ground. They can also control this stones direction while riding, allowing them to glide across the battlefield. The stone will quickly lose momentum once the rider jumps off however, meaning it is generally unsuitable for use as a projectile. [color=ed1c24]not really B rank but cute jutsu[/color] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Earth Release: Great Stone Hand [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] A [b]Range:[/b] Close/Mid [b]Nature Type:[/b] Earth [b]Description:[/b] The user summons a large stone hand from the earth, similar to Stone Fist but without connecting to the users body. This hand can punch and grab, but is only controllable for about five to ten seconds, after which it will return to normal stone. In addition, only two hands can be created at once, and the jutsu itself is rather chakra intensive. Therefore, it is not a very viable jutsu for repetitive use. [color=ed1c24]if i get this right, its big stone hands that kinda mimic yours? that's a cool concept[/color] [/hider] [color=ed1c24]Interesting char overall, nothing bad about it so you can post in the CS section. You've been made aware of the risks! But don't worry it won't just fuck you over instantly. There needs build up in this sort of stuff.[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [/center][/hider] [hr] [hider=Kaguya Yogensha][color=black] [CENTER][img]http://i.imgur.com/xrg5wOY.png[/img] [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUapX3WunU8[/youtube] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]http://i.imgur.com/9oQyb1g.png[/img] [color=ed1c24]creepy kaguya version[/color] --------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/Center][/Color] [color=black]【[U]Full Name[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Kaguya Yogensha[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]'Stranger'[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Gender[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Female[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Age[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]29[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Mid-to-late twenties[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Sexuality[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Heterosexual [color=ed1c24]pls dion[/color][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Village[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e5/Kirigakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222755[/img] [b]Kirigakure no Sato[/b][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Birthplace[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][b][s]The [color=ed1c24]New[/color] Continent.[/s] As far as officials from other countries are concerned, she was born in Kirigakure no Sato.[/b][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e5/Kirigakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222755[/img] [b]Kirigakure no Sato[/b][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Kaguya Clan[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Rank[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Jounin[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Primary:[indent] [img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e2/Nature_Icon_Yin%E2%80%93Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] [b]Yin-yang[/b][/indent] Secondary: [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton[/b][/indent] Tertiary: [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton[/b][/indent][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Yogensha is the epitome of a calm, collected individual and it shows in her dress. Typically enjoying her position as the leader of Amegakure to it's full extent, she is always seen in perfectly ironed clothing that matches her perfectly. Otherwise she takes great care of herself, mostly her hair and her face. Being a woman, she believes that her first tool as a shinobi is her appearance, which can be deceiving upon first sight as she looks more like a daimyo's daughter than a kunoichi. [/i][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=black]【[U]Personality[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Yogensha is calm, collected, takes her time for things - even when she pours tea, she is the epitome of calm. Her entire appearance betrays nothing about her thoughts, and it is not uncommon for her to take several days of contemplation to reach a conclusion, making the diplomatic envoys of her allies and enemies wait all that time. It is unfitting of a Kaguya, and anyone can tell she is one by her remarkable appearance, marked with red dots. [color=ed1c24]total /casual/[/color] In truth, it is because she is a former shrinemaiden, where they calmed her Kaguya-wilderness and exchanged it with calm, peace, tranquility of mind. Originally she had a wild streak, much more becoming of a Kaguya, and was constantly on the move to escape the people that were chasing her - angry peasants, mostly, for the ruckus she caused in their villages. Her moral compass was led completely astray by her parents, who had taught her to look out for herself and only herself - even the clan was secondary to herself. Theft, murder, it was all okay in her eyes. Thankfully, it never got to murder to turn her around. When the shrinemaidens took her in, she was resistant to their teachings, but over time it was only natural she became a part of them, and learned to do as they did. The wild streak disappeared partially. From then on forwards she became who she is now - peaceful, though it is said she is simply a slumbering bear waiting to be woken. It makes her annoying to deal with on occasion, as she always insists on thinking things through and weighing the options. Those who critique her for this, saying she is incapable of making decisions in situations where a quick response is required, they misjudge how capable she is. She is fully aware of her nature and desire to think things through, and knows when to discard this in favour of quick decisionmaking. To her, the power lies in offsetting your enemy - make them believe you are taking your time to think, to move, to act, and then act quickly, destroying them with a single strike, piercing them in the heart - there where it will hurt the most. [color=ed1c24]slow and steaaaady. cute personality[/color][/i][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=black]【[U]History[/U]】[/color] [color=ed1c24]read this when you first posted, nothing's wrong. not in the moods to go for more dumb comments.[/color] [indent][i]Yogensha was born in an area where little to nothing stood - there were no villages, no people, or even animals. Just wide open plains that were occasionally used for travel. Steppes - that's what the locals called them. The few that existed. It was more or less a requirement to travel by horse here, unless you were a shinobi and could travel faster than the average human. They were ... areas that were of little importance to the rest of the world, but meant everything to Yogensha at a young age. There she could be free. She was raised in the same way - free, without a care, only yourself to worry about. Everything else was a matter for someone else, but not the Kaguya's. How wrong they were, but how blissful it could be to be wrong. When she was six she was sent eastwards with a clan of traveling merchants together with her younger sibling. Passed off by her parents like they were.. dead weight. It was natural - like a bird throwing their young out the nest, this was her parents way of saying 'grow up'. It was only later she realized that her parents didn't know better - that they were raised in the same way. But back then it felt like her heart was torn from her. She screamed, kicked and cried as they took her. 'We have orders,' they said, 'to take you to Sunagakure.' She didn't want to go to Sunagakure. Traveling was harsh. The merchants were slow and took every opportunity to stop and rest. As they got further and further from the steppes where her parents were, she could almost feel the connection severing until something snapped in her head. It was an audible snap - it was just gone. She didn't care anymore. Perhaps she realized herself that there was nothing she could do, or perhaps she figured that her parents didn't care so why should she? Again, she later realized that this wasn't the truth, but at that moment it helped her get through things. Arriving at Sunagakure, Yogensha and her sibling did not hang around like they were supposed to and didn't enroll in the academy. Rather they left as soon as they were able to, trekking through the desert together to find and explore new lands. It was natural that a child with a wild side to them would do whatever it pleased, especially if it were raised in such a way where the only thing that matters is yourself. Ultimately this was the driving force behind Yogensha's life. It didn't take long for the natural abilities beholden in the Kaguya clan to take hold of her, allowing her control over her bones as if they were tools. A gimmicky thing at first, a valuable art of warfare later. This went paired with her ability to channel the powers of the gods - or well, she thought it was the power of the gods. During her period in the desert she became very religious, seeing the presence of the Sage of the Six Paths as well as his sons Asura and Indra in everything. They represented balance. Balance between the blood thirst of the Kaguya clan, and the peacefulness of the Sage's teaching. During their travels the two Kaguya siblings were picked up by Kirigakure operatives who had been sent out to collect the two presumed orphans. It was originally a simple retrieval mission to take two kids off the road and into an orphanage but quickly became more when it was evident the two came from the dark continent. The two siblings then underwent years of interrogation to get any information out of them, though somewhat unluckily for them Yogensha could not tell much - after all, she was a child when she left and only knew the border region where the steppes were. In return for these years of interrogation she was regarded as somewhat of an interesting individual who had appeared from nowhere and was given special privileges, treated as something of a guest of honour at times and an exotic animal to be shown off at other times. This only ended when she entered service for the Chūsei Kokoro Hoji-sha, the CKH, otherwise known as the Loyalty Holders. During her service there she essentially operated in the highly political scene of Kirigakure by ensuring that any military corporations that got too big for their boots were put back in place, to let them know 'Kirigakure is watching' and that action would be taken if anyone got funny ideas about independence.[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Family relations[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Kaguya Yame | Mother | 56, free spirit and wanderer of the lands to the west, the steppes in uncharted lands. Kaguya Hanzou | Father | 55, free spirit and wanderer of the lands to the west, the steppes in uncharted lands - recently founded a small house in the middle of the steppe where he hopes to settle down, although his wife is still resisting him by running away almost nightly. Neither are in contact with their daughter. [color=ed1c24]no shit[/color][/i][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [hider=Asura no Teisai][indent][color=black][u]Kekkei genkai name[/u][/color] [indent]Asura no Teisai - Visage of the Asura[/indent] [center][img]https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/7/79/Shinto_torii_vermillion.svg/125px-Shinto_torii_vermillion.svg.png[/img][/center] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]This style of fighting is typical to Yogensha, as nobody but her has managed to grasp it and utilize it. It is based on the wisdom she has gathered, the desire to learn more about the people in the world, the environment and the power contained within chakra - a path to Enlightenment. But although the Enlightenment is contained within the style, the style refers more to Indra than Asura, using power, ninjutsu, force and law to uphold the values that is deemed important. As such, 'peace' is merely an extension of 'war' in the sense that peace is formed through war, and war is bred through peace. This philosophy lies at the heart of the style. If we were to discuss the properties of the style in battle, it could be said that the style is used to take on numerous 'heavenly' qualities. If the style is utilized in full, it makes the user resemble something of a God(dess) in a more human way. Although quite obviously this is nowhere close to the levels of Indra and Asura, it does draw on their powers quite a bit. Because this is not quite a kekkei genkai but more so a [i]style[/i] specific to her, it would be hard to say in general what the description is. For a more detailed understanding, you'd have to consider the individual (custom) jutsu. [/indent] [color=black][u]Strengths[/u][/color] [indent]The strengths lie particularily in the application of the various jutsu's - they are versatile, and can be used defensively and offensively. This is because they are usually enhancements.[/indent] [color=black][u]Weaknesses[/u][/color] [indent]You'll have to outsmart, outpower, or simply brute-force your way past her, as the techniques themselves are not particularly inclined towards any element. Another weakness is that despite the visage of a Goddess, she remains very human. Stab her and she will bleed, hurt her and she will cry. She is not a goddess. Just looks like one.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Shikotsumyaku][indent][color=black][u]Kekkei genkai name[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shikotsumyaku]Shikotsumyaku[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]Manipulation of bones (see wiki). [color=ed1c24]boooonz[/color][/indent] [/indent][/hider] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=black]【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】[/color] [hider=six weapons][indent][color=black][u]Weapon name[/u][/color] [indent]Asura no tate ([i][s]Shield of Asura[/s] [color=ed1c24]Madara's Gunbai[/color][/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://f.ptcdn.info/539/044/000/oan4wb9ut0J1KFnHcCE-o.jpg]Gunbai[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]The gunbai [color=ed1c24]you seriously have a problem with gunbais[/color] is made of chakra-infused hardwood, meaning that it is durable and capable of deflecting blows. Kunai and shuriken thrown at it will get stuck in it, damaging the wood but ultimately not breaking it. Chopping motions by light blades (kunai, small cleavers, some lightweight katana's) will not damage it, perhaps slice the edges a bit. Larger blades (the blades used by the seven swordsmen of the mist, for example) would cleave the gunbai more easily, requiring a few hits to take it down, but ultimately doing the job. The infusion of wind chakra allows the user to 'deflect' ninjutsu too in the case of small ninjutsu. Similarly, small gusts of wind that can do small cutting damage may be created by the gunbai too. [color=ed1c24]fukin madara's uchiha return[/color] It's typically wielded in the left hand.[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=black][u]Weapon name[/u][/color] [indent]Indra no seigi ([i]Justice of Indra[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://i1320.photobucket.com/albums/u531/ktl78/K500501_zps0db0de99.jpg]Chokuto[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]A standard straight-edge chokuto. No defining properties, other than the fact that it is Yogensha's. It can be broken by a focused technique, like lightning infused blades.[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=black][u]Weapon name[/u][/color] [indent]Heiwa o suishin suru ([i]Promoting Peace[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://cdn2.bigcommerce.com/n-pktq5q/fjltq92h/products/103/images/372/Shakujo_01_150__45279.1437007506.1280.1280.jpg?c=2]Shakujo[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]A regular shakujo. Made of wood, with a tip of iron. It's hard, you can be bashed over the head with it. Besides that, no real extremely important properties. In the right hands it's a valuable weapon, in the wrong hands it'll be a regular staff of wood with an iron tip.[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=black][u]Weapon name[/u][/color] [indent]Sensō o ukeireru ([i]Accepting War[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://casiberia.com/img/prod/sh1020.jpg]Naginata[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]A regular naginata. The staff is wood, the tip is steel. It cuts well. It can be augmented with wind chakra to make it cut even better-er. But, ultimately, just a regular weapon that holds no legendary qualities. Still, a weapon to take into account.[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=black][u]Weapon name[/u][/color] [indent]Hikari ([i]the Light[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://samuraijapan.co.jp/forauction/monika/IronFan2/ts-w-ryoma.jpg]Iron-ribbed Fan[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]A traditional fan made with iron ribs and paper fans. If used properly, you can use it to block incoming strikes by deflecting them. But, it requires a lot of training. Training Yogensha has.[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=black][u]Weapon name[/u][/color] [indent]Kurai ([i]the Dark[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://orig06.deviantart.net/6712/f/2011/361/9/d/nagamaki_by_akapnos-d4ke4i0.jpg]Nagamaki[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]A nagamaki, a type of naginata that features a shorter handle, making it a 'sword' with an unusually long handle. Again, no strange qualities or so. It's a regular nagamaki. It will cut you and you can break it if you try hard enough.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][color=black][u]S rank techniques[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e2/Nature_Icon_Yin%E2%80%93Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Kami no kami o shōkan suru [img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/6/64/Nature_Icon_Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Brahmastra [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rain_Tiger_at_Will_Technique][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Ukojizai no Jutsu[/b][/url][/indent] [color=ed1c24]no longer ame char so kind of completely unnecessary[/color] [color=black][u]A rank techniques[/u] [/color] okay that's a lot of A rank stuff even if a lot of it is just variation. Recommend just purging what you don't need. [indent][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/6/64/Nature_Icon_Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Asura no Teisai [img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/d/de/Nature_Icon_Yin.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093714[/img] Indra no Guntai [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Blade_of_Wind] [color=ed1c24][/color][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Kaze no Yaiba[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Wind_Cutter_Technique][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Kazekiri no Jutsu[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Beast_Tearing_Palm][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Jūha Shō[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Great_Shark_Bullet_Technique][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img][b] Suiton: Daikōdan no Jutsu[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ten-Finger_Drilling_Bullets][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a9/Shikotsumyaku_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20120114234247[/img] [b]Shikotsumyaku: Teshi Sendan[/b][/url][/indent][color=ed1c24]can be downgraded if you want to keep it[/color] [color=black][u]B rank techniques[/u][/color] [color=ed1c24]same here, may wanna just remove the redundancies.[/color] [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e2/Nature_Icon_Yin%E2%80%93Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Asura no ude [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dance_of_the_Larch][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a9/Shikotsumyaku_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20120114234247[/img] [b]Shikotsumyaku: Karamatsu no Mai[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dance_of_the_Willow][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a9/Shikotsumyaku_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20120114234247[/img] [b]Shikotsumyaku: Yanagi no Mai [/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Air_Current_Wild_Dance][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Kiryū Ranbu[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Sphere][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Shinkūgyoku[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Wave][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Shinkūha[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Drowning_Water_Blob_Technique][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton: Drowning Water Blob Technique[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Clone_Technique]Kage Bunshin no Jutsu[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]C rank techniques[/u][/color] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dust_Wind_Technique][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Fūsajin no Jutsu[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Heavenly_Weeping][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton: Tenkyū[/b][/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Blade][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] [b]Fūton: Shinkūjin[/b][/url] [img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/d/de/Nature_Icon_Yin.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093714[/img] Indra no Teisai [img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/6/64/Nature_Icon_Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Sējizuai ([i]Sage's Eye[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]D rank techniques[/u][/color] [indent][/indent] [color=black][u]E rank techniques[/u][/color] [indent][/indent][/indent] [color=black]| Custom techniques: |[/color] [indent][color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/6/64/Nature_Icon_Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Asura no Teisai ([i]Visage of Asura[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]A[/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]N/A[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]The user will form the tiger seal with two hands, or one if they are that way inclined. Afterwards, the user will 'sprout' four sets of arms that will grow from their back, and are under the full control of the user. This allows them to, for example, form handseals with these arms, or hold weapons. The arms also create new chakra paths inside of them that connect to the original chakra path. Therefore, while this technique seems simple, it's extremely difficult as the body must adjust to the new motor skills required to move the arms, as well as to accustom to the chakra paths. Yogensha has perfected this art, but a new student would likely struggle to learn this technique, if he ever manages to learn it at all. [color=ed1c24]seems good[/color] As it is a manifestation of 'creation' it is a direct representation of Asura, whom was a master of Yang release among other things.[/indent] [color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/d/de/Nature_Icon_Yin.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093714[/img] Indra no Teisai ([i]Visage of Indra[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]C[/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]N/A[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]The jutsu starts by forming a tiger seal, one handed or two handed. The user then needs to take their time to gather yin chakra at their chest, to prepare for the next move. A result of the gathering of chakra is that they need to hold the tiger seal for as long as it takes, but also that they begin resembling 'Indra' and thus, a light blue line appears [url=http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/8/8c/Indra_%C5%8Ctsutsuki_Infobox.png/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/300?cb=20160710011600]under their eyes.[/url][/indent] [color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/d/de/Nature_Icon_Yin.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093714[/img] Indra no Guntai ([i]Army of Indra[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]A[/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]A circle of 10m in diameter around the user.[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]This technique is the follow up to Indra no Teisai, using the built up Yin chakra to cast a powerful genjutsu. As Indra embodied Yin chakra, this technique is the embodiment of Indra. The user will perform the genjutsu at the moment they release the tiger seal, with the 'trigger' for the genjutsu being the words she speaks afterwards. These words can, quite literally, be anything as the words are not important, but the sound of her voice is. After the genjutsu is cast, those under it's effect will be faced with a sudden purple mist setting in, limiting their view rather harshly. It is possible for them to be in the same 'circle' clear of mist with other people. Then, from the mist, a 'clone' of Yogensha will appear. This is the genjutsu in two parts; the mist is one genjutsu, the clone is another, but they act together and are cast and dispelled together. The genjutsu clone is, in theory, a perfect human, and will fight without mistakes. They will block all the attacks that are thrown at them, but all their attacks will never hit (because, a genjutsu has no 'life' and no physical presence due to the fact that there is no yang chakra) and will therefore always pretend to miss, or to be blocked. As a result, the clone will engage in an engagement that can theoretically last forever. As a result the target will lose stamina fighting the clone and, if they remain unaware of the genjutsu, can be targeted by anyone. Therefore it is easy for someone (Yogensha for instance) to attack and take down the enemy. As the genjutsu is convincing and similar to other 'real' techniques (the mist technique from Kirigakure, for example) it would be hard to see through it. But if it is found out [i]somehow[/i], it is possible to dispel it using regular means. A better way to deal with it would be to realize the clones aren't physical, and ignoring them. However, this leaves the mist, and would force you to fight in the mist with limited vision. [b]The genjutsu affects allies as well. Allies caught in the genjutsu would need to be freed from it by Yogesha/someone else, or else they will see the mist and Yogensha attacking them as well.[/b] Also, deaf people are not susceptible to this genjutsu at all because they cannot hear the trigger.[/indent] [color=ed1c24]careful, she's now strong at every domain with multiple elements. dont push her strength too much odin.[/color] [color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/6/64/Nature_Icon_Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Brahmastra[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]S - [i]kinjutsu, forbidden technique[/i][/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]close-range kill-move[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]Yogensha forms a tiger seal with as many hands as she can spare, and molds chakra inside of, and around, her heart. The more hands she uses, the quicker it goes, although it is possible to use one hand only, lengthening the time it takes to prepare the chakra significantly. After she has enough chakra, her arms lunge forwards and move into the target, at which point they become paralyzed (some say it's because of fear, others say it's because of the poison she supposedly has on her hands, others say it's an effect of her chakra). Yogensha's hands will slowly move into the target until they reach it's targets, and the victim can feel her hands on the inside the entire time, until her hands make a grabbing motion and grab something that they'd never felt before, something that isn't meant to 'be' in the body. Then Yogensha pulls it out, pulling something that appears to be like a cloud of chakra out of the body of the victim. It's entirely crippling, and even if she's unable to get it all out before being interrupted, it will still do lasting, permanent damage that is not recoverable through regular medical means. If she manages to pull it all out, the victim enters a dormant state, falling over and laying there - on some occasions they essentially become a plant, cursed to live in a hospital forever, staring forever forwards, never becoming truly alive again. Others simply die straight away or after a few seconds. Yogensha herself is not truly sure what she is actually pulling out, only that it is her chakra and her nature as a representation of Indra and Asura that allows her to do it - she supposed, therefore, that it is either the soul of a person or their entire chakra reserve that she pulls out. The jutsu is, however, extremely dangerous to the victim, so she has never been able to truly study it, only having used it on occasion. [/indent] [color=ed1c24]get it in the rp through development[/color] [color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e2/Nature_Icon_Yin%E2%80%93Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Asura no ude ([i]Asura's Arms[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]B[/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]N/A[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]Although it is in essence a rather common summoning technique, the difficulty lies in that it summons three sets of two weapons all at once, making one appear in each hand of the Asura stance. The details will be found in the weapons bit.[/indent] [color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/6/64/Nature_Icon_Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Sējizuai ([i]Sage's Eye[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]C[/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]N/A[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]Focusing their energy on their forehead, an eye made of chakra appears that can move around the head at will. It allows the user to add an additional sight sensor to their array, allowing them more attention-per-minute and thus a greater chance of seeing things coming that would otherwise be lost on the eyes. Since it can move around, however, it can also move behind the user, and thus see where they normally can't see. It's constraint is, however, that it can't move away from the body.[/indent] [color=black][u]Jutsu name[/u][/color] [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/e/e2/Nature_Icon_Yin%E2%80%93Yang.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20100916093715[/img] Kami no kami o shōkan suru ([i]Summoning the God of Gods[/i])[/indent] [color=black][u]Rank[/u][/color] [indent]S[/indent] [color=black][u]Range[/u][/color] [indent]N/A[/indent] [color=black][u]Description[/u][/color] [indent]Using all six arms, the user will perform a summoning jutsu, for which the handseals are different for all three pairs of hands. Hence, this technique could only be used by someone that has mastered the Visage of Asura technique. This summoning requires no contract - the God of Gods is not a living creature. Rather, it is.. best comparable with a statue inhabited by a spirit, or multiple spirits. It is an ancient thing coming from the age of the first two shinobi - Indra and Asura - that was said to have the spirits of Indra and Asura within it. The truth of that is contestable, but the sheer power and size of the thing speaks volumes. When the God of Gods is on the battlefield, the allies of the summoner will feel inspired and be inclined to fight harder. Similarly, the enemies will feel demoralized and will have a hard time to continue fighting with the lurking eyes of the God of Gods upon them, judging them for opposing him. Furthermore, the statue has numerous other capabilities that will be detailed in the summoning sheet for the creature. [color=ed1c24]same as the other S rank, though once you have said /sheet/ up, you can start actively developing it in the rp.[/color][/indent][/indent] [color=black]__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[/color] [color=ed1c24]Right now Yogensha is in Kage mode and needs to be toned down. She can use ninjutsu (elements and range), taijutsu (bones and super arms) and genjutsu (only one but it's actually really damn strong). Give room for her to evolve in her skills, especially considering her past, she can diverge a lot from what you initially intended for her. I think that's a good thing. Character's fine beyond that, can post in the CS bin when you've purged the S ranks and reduced the amount of jutsu.[/color][/hider] [hr] [hider=Not Volcarona] [center][url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7IHLoKZcwC0] Theme Song[/url] [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s6TsyUXuJTk]True Theme[/url] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]https://i.pinimg.com/736x/e3/48/3e/e3483e46d4a39fa970e1eb1a54bb7686--pokemon-gijinka-character-design.jpg[/img] [color=ed1c24]we had syn's not-aizen butterfly fag, now this. jfc[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Full Name[/U]】[color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] 【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】Heir to the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] Clan 【[U]Gender[/U]】Male 【[U]Age[/U]】20 【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】17 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】[s]Straight[/s] [color=ed1c24]you're not fooling anyone connor[/color] 【[U]Nation[/U]】[color=ed1c24]Emperor's PC[/color] 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】[color=ed1c24]Viridian City[/color] 【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】[color=ed1c24]IV breeding box[/color] 【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】 [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] Clan - The year? Who knows. The [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan were a nomadic clan, known primarily, and only for their ability to access a powerful kekkei genkai. But due to their poor choices they made enemies left and right, and thus spent the clan's formative years traveling across the area that would one day become the Empire of Stone. They didn't keep a written history, so much of their early history is sadly lost. It wasn't until the founding of the Empire of Stone that the history of [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan was formally composed. Despite this, the clan was still mostly unknown, as they underpreformed in comparison to other clans that possessed the steel release [color=ed1c24]that's because they are fire bugs[/color]. It wasn't until the discovery of the [color=ed1c24]Other Volcarona[/color] that the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan managed to rise out of the dirt. The metal eating beetles became just as much a part of the clan as the dogs in the [color=ed1c24]Zigzagoon[/color] clan. Utilizing their metal eating insects, they managed to push themselves over the other metal clans, and in the end the clan infighting resulted in the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] consuming the other clans, leaving them as the primary noble clan to possess the steel style release. Under the leadership of [color=ed1c24]More Volcarona[/color] the clan participated in the first great ninja war. Where their successes revolved around assassination. The clan often butted heads with the [color=ed1c24]Beedrill[/color] clan, and the two clans eventually began to merge together. Sharing their [color=ed1c24]bug type[/color] knowledge and special clan techniques. Eventually resulting in a complete merger, that ended with the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] clan's name continuing on as the [color=ed1c24]Beedrill[/color] vanished as their final daughter joined with the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color]. During the second ninja war, with the expansion of war machines, the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan's metal devouring [color=ed1c24]Larvesta[/color] shone. By sneaking into the enemy area, they would often sabotage enemy weapons by having their [color=ed1c24]bug type pokemon[/color] destroy the infrastructure of the enemy's weapons. During the destruction of the land of clouds, the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] played a vital part, and were raised to a noble family as thanks for their contributions. Since then, the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] have been one of the Empire of Stone's prized tactical [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color]. [color=ed1c24]Serious talk. Not 100% sure of them rising to nobility by just being useful vs a nation that died mostly due to their lack of technological advances. I'll say its fine, but that then means they've only been recently added to the list. Fresh, low-level nobles.[/color] 【[U]Rank[/U]】 Jounin / Assassination Squad / [color=ed1c24]Fire and Bug type Pokemon[/color] 【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】 Earth, Fire, [i]Steel[/i] [color=ed1c24]no magma? pleb[/color] 【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】 Like most soldiers of the Empire of Stone, the nobility wears their uniforms in the most pristine way possible. The nobility is seperated from the common soldier by a unique insignia on the length of their arm, which works to highlight them to their soldiers, without making them stand out as targets. In public, outside of military service, [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] is a well dressed gentle[color=ed1c24]bug[/color]. Often seen wearing some degree of fine wear, his most distinguished article of clothing is a cloak. A multilayered cloak that resembles the fluff of a greater moth. This outfit, despite its many layers and flourishes is designed in mind to breath. Giving [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] plenty of space to utilize his clan [color=ed1c24]Larvesta[/color]. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Personality[/U]】 [u][b]The Nobility of the Empire[/b][/u] There is something about the way [color=ed1c24]volcarona hovers[/color]. The way he looks at others that just tells you that he's nobility. This is the sign of the noble [color=ed1c24]pokemon[/color]. Raised from birth to present themselves to the public as if actors on a stage. To never slouch, to always maintain eye contact, to always be generous to those who serve well. In a way, [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] is more of a puppet to his family, with a finally crafted personality born from a selective training program. In a way, he is everything the empire adores in its nobility. Power, a crafty mind, and a loyalty to the empire. A loyalty to the emperor above all. Because what is the empire without its emperor? [color=ed1c24]they value his ability flame body too[/color] [b][u]The Intelligence of an Assassin[/u][/b] [color=ed1c24]implying half the assassins are smart[/color] [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] learned to harden his heart to certain things long ago, even before the war. His heart was frozen to the plights of the empire's enemies [color=ed1c24]but was unfrozen when he used lava plume, damn that articuno[/color]. No matter how just, noble, or kind they may be, he swallowed his objections, and killed. [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color]'s coldness allows him to approach problems with an analytical [color=ed1c24]compound eyed[/color] perspective. By approaching each problem in the sense of value per life, it is difficult in a way for [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] to see the human aspect of his actions, or his victims. But, at the very least he keeps it quick. He wastes little, and his kills are as swift as he can make them. [color=ed1c24]for a high critical hit rate[/color] [b][u]Ambition is Evil[/u][/b] The old saying is that ambition is evil. Looking to a higher position, and fighting to claim it can often be a path that leads one down dark corridors. Despite his current noble [color=ed1c24]pokemon[/color] position, [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] is ambitious. He desires to be in a position of appreciation, and the approval of the emperor himself. In a way, this ambition could be evil, but [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] doesn't care. After all, there is nothing wrong with ambition. It's foolish self destruction that comes hand in hand with ambition that is a danger. A danger that [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] believes he has avoided. [color=ed1c24]he used double team, that cheating fuck[/color] [b][u][/u][/b] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]History[/U]】 [b][u]We begin with a child born in a forest of metal, much like the insects he controls[/u][/b] [color=ed1c24]spode has the best themes i know[/color] The [color=ed1c24]Viridian city[/color] lays deep within the Empire of Earth. A kind of realm so alien from our own that the mind just can't comprehend it. For centuries, each child of the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] has been born in this alien land of steel as if to introduce them to the world in a way that they will never be surprised by anything else. Because once you see [color=ed1c24]Viridian city[/color], your mind refuses to accept anything else. That's the story anyway. The young [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] didn't see that [color=ed1c24]city[/color] again until he was five, when he was brought back to become a vessel for the [color=ed1c24]Larvesta[/color]. His his insides were changed, his body reconstructed, and for over a month he was left in the clan chambers until his body had fully adjusted to the necessary changes. [b][u]Host to the Kinzoku[/u][/b] It was odd at first, having to adjust to the changes to his body. More so having to utilize his [color=ed1c24]special ability[/color] as a means to grow the metals that the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] lived off. By growing it over his skin, and learning how to manipulate them to his fullest extent. As nobility, he learned from his clan, inside [color=ed1c24]Viridian city[/color]. Soon enough, as a year passed, [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] was adding his own tree of metal to the illustrious collection. But more so, he learned to use the clan's [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] and manipulate their growth. Soon enough, he was drafted for the war at the age of ten. [b][u]Weapons of War are not a Man Makes[/u][/b] In war everybody learns their place. For [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] he learned his role first as a form of sabotage. The [color=ed1c24]heracross[/color] did the hard work. The task of commanding them, sending them in, destroying the machines of war. That was easy to him. After all, he knew how to do that. Then they wanted him to kill. [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] refused. He worked behind the lines, trying to avoid the killing, but eventually he did. It was a man from Konoha. A fire shinobi. He was terrified. Fighting against the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] as they bit him, forced him to the ground... [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] drove a spear of metal right through his face, killing him and ending his misery. From there, he was tasked to do more of that. With his insects allowing him to spy on the enemy, he was made into an assassin. Tasked more and more to kill shinobi of the land of fire, and even then more shinobi from all over. By the time he was 15, he had killed more men and woman on these missions than he could count [color=ed1c24]edgy poke[/color]. Not because he couldn't count that high, but because he was bored of it by that point. It was just a mission. Just another mission for the boy with a heart as cold as steel. [b][u]War ends when he is only just becoming a man[/u][/b] [color=ed1c24]a '''''''man''''''[/color] The day the war ended, was the day after [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] turned 18. For eight of his formative years, he had spent them as an assassin. Killing, sabotaging, and giving to the empire. And now, as the war ended, he had to find a reason to keep going. Not just for the sake of living and the empire, but a personal goal. A goal to aid the empire further, with his body and blood as the mortar. But to do so, he must not be complacent with his role. No, he must strive higher. The new world... That offers such an opportunity. Especially if he is to represent the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan. [color=ed1c24]Onwards to the Kalos region!!!![/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Special Traits[/U]】 + [i]Natural Born Leader[/i] - Despite his sometimes rude behavior, the ability to lead and make difficult choices, as well as motivate others, is something the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan has always fostered. [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] just so happens to be one with a natural talent for inspiring some to push themselves. [color=ed1c24]i dont want another 'mongolian bull worm' situation where you cannot settle with anything other than him looking good. leadership is both IC and OOC. Be aware of this.[/color] + [i]Remarkable Perception[/i] - Many claim the Sharingan to be unsurpassed [color=ed1c24]its true[/color], but [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] is remarkably perceptive on his own. He can pinpoint key details in a fight even in a mess of high speed action. This is a key skill when manipulating groups of insects. + [i]Strategic Prowess[/i] - Pattern Recognition is important for a strategist. [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] has studied patterns and common military tactics, as well as advanced tactics. His primary tactic tends to revolve around fear, by utilizing his [color=ed1c24]butterfrees[/color]. + [i]Encyclopedic Knowledge of [color=ed1c24]Bug type pokemon[/color][/i] - A life spent around [color=ed1c24]heracross[/color] and [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] has given [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] a great breadth of knowledge regarding how to control and communicate with insects of many varieties. 【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】 [u][b][color=ed1c24]stealth rock[/color][/b][/u] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】 [hider=Larvesta] [b][i][color=ed1c24]Larvesta[/color][/i][/b] - A rare breed of [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] discovered over five centuries ago in the land that would one day be Iwagakure. The [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color], are a unique breed of [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] that lived under the earth. They would cluster around ore deposits and eat the metal deep underground. But, due to the difficulty of finding ore veins as time went on, the species was slowly becoming extinct. The insect was discovered by the [color=ed1c24]VPokemon[/color] clan, and the clan's metal producing ability was used to attract and tame the insect, creating a symbiotic relationship. As the clan could utilize their chakra to create metal object, they began to house the insects alongside themselves. [color=ed1c24]pretty cool i'll admit[/color] With the age of iron coming, the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] became a powerful weapon of the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan. Utilizing their abilities, the insects could strip the armor off a shinobi in seconds, or eat kunai right out of the air. Almost like airborne piranha. Through the years, and selective breeding, the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] developed a unique neurotoxin. The process of which is transmitted by a needle on their rear. The toxin, while not particularly powerful from one insect, is a hallucinogenic. It can make it difficult to focus on objects, and screws with the targets depth perception. The more times a target is stung, the worse the hallucinations become. And in its highest doses can cause vomiting. Thought that can take close to a hundred stings for a full grown adult. Almost like termites, one of the main tactics of the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan is to have the insects be spread about an area, and burrow into metal, where they weaken the structure and cause its eventual collapse. It is possible for a single member of the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan to cause an entire building to collapse by chewing through the metal supports that keep the building up. While not a primarily meat eating insect, they are omnivorous. Their bites are incredibly painful, and should they manage to get under the skin they can burrow around underneath the skin, and cause severe internal damage. [b]TLDR:[/b] Bugs eat metal. [b][i]Kyodaina[/i][/b] - Under varying circumstances certain insects can grow to tremendous sizes. Such is the caste of the [color=ed1c24]Pinsir[/color]. Bred as a kind of transport [color=ed1c24]pokemon[/color] by the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color], it also has a high metal diet. But it also possesses a craving for meats. So while the giant insect is often used to carry other shinobi, it can also eat bodies that need to be disposed of. The [color=ed1c24]pinsir[/color] possesses a set of pinchers specifically designed for cutting into metal. Almost like a sword, it can slice through a suit of armor, or other hard materials, like stone or ice. [/hider] [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Iron [color=ed1c24]Pokeball[/color] [u]Description:[/u] A large container, designed to house the many [color=ed1c24]bug type pokemon[/color] of the [color=ed1c24]Vpokemon[/color] clan and too be summoned if for any reason their insect supply is running low during battle. Each container holds roughly 2,000 insects in an area roughly 6'x6'. These Hives are used when a member of the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] has been in battle and their current batch of [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] insects is dead or incapacitated. [u]Appearance:[/u] A large metal container, carved with the shape of [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] along the sides, wrapping up to the top. The container is used to hold extras of the insects, with holes littered about to have them released over time. [/I] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Kekkei Genkai [/U]】 [I][U]Name of Kekkei Genkai:[/u] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release]Steel Release[/url] [U]Clan:[/U] [color=ed1c24]Pokemon/Volcarona[/color] (And other smaller clans) [U]Description:[/U] The [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan possesses the Steel Release Kekkei Genkai. Often referred to as the ultimate defense against others, this ability allows the user to generate metals from their body. While the various metals change slightly from person to person, they share many of the same properties. A hard metal shell can be grown from the user's skin, and even as a projectile that can be fire from their body. In other cases, it can even be spat out as a rapidly hardening metal, and formed into various projectiles. It is formed from the Earth, and Fire elements, [color=ed1c24]i would have made it a TK due to its uniqueness[/color] with many believing it to be an offshot [color=ed1c24]it is here[/color] of the Lava Release style. Various smaller clans still possess the steel release, but the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona[/color] had long since become the main clan to possess such a ability.[/I] [color=ed1c24]Weaknesses would be lightning and water, then?[/color] ------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Jutsu[/U]】[/center] [hider=Canon Jutsu] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release:_Impervious_Armour]Steel Release: Impervious Armor[/url] [color=ed1c24]considering this A rank. Can't move too much when active and all that, you get it.[/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release:_Steel_Shield_Technique]Steel Shield Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release:_Steel_Projectile]Steel Release: Steel Projectile[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Insect_Clone_Technique]Secret Technique: Insect Clone Technique[/url] [color=ed1c24]eats flesh instead of chakra, yes.[/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Insect_Jar_Technique]Secret Technique: Insect Jar Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Secret_Technique:_Insect_Sphere]Secret Technique: Insect Sphere[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Secret_Technique:_Insect_Tornado]Secret Technique: Insect Tornado[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Thousand_Bee_Stings_Technique]Thousand Bee Stings Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiding_with_Camouflage_Technique]Hiding with Camouflage Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Added-Weight_Rock_Technique]Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Light-Weight_Rock_Technique]Earth Release: Light-Weight Rock Technique[/url] [color=ed1c24]no flight, the two jutsu here are strong enough with their weight manipulation abilities.[/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning_Technique]Summoning Technique[/url] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name:[/b] Steel Release: Housing Insects Technique [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] N/A [b]Nature:[/b] N/A [b]Type:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Effect:[/b] A primary technique of the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan, and one of their most practical. The base of this technique is that their bodies are opened up and redesigned into insect nests. Their ability to create layers of metal over their own skin or inside their bodies is used to feed the insects, who protect the host and listen to them. It is possible as a result, for the user to create projectiles or weapons in which the insects are already living. Allowing them to be scattered around an area before release. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Steel Release: Instantaneous Stinger [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] Mid-Long range [b]Nature Type:[/b] Steel [b]Description:[/b] A fairly simple technique, based around the ability to rapidly grow metal from the user's body. Making this one of the first techniques that users of the Steel Release tend to learn. The main usage of this technique is that when the user waves their hands, or points in a general direction, foot long spear of metal are fired from their skin. The best example of this would be the finger drilling bullet technique from the [color=ed1c24]spooky skeleton[/color] clan. Advanced users of this skill can utilize it to shape various kinds of projectiles, like shuriken, kunai, or even swords. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Steel Release: Veins [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] Mid-range Area of Effect [b]Nature Type:[/b] Steel [b]Description:[/b] Utilizing the Steel Release, the user is capable of growing spikes of steel from the ground. Utilizing this technique, the [color=ed1c24]Pokemon[/color] clan developed a powerful terraforming jutsu. By turning the ground around them to steel, the clan creates an area where their [color=ed1c24]heracross[/color], the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color], to burrow about, or even feast and grow their numbers if there aren't any enemies about. The spears of steel produced from this technique vary, but can be roughly ten feet long, and appear in a noticeably erratic pattern. As a result, this technique is a powerful defense, attack, and support ability all in one. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Steel Release: Forest of Steel [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Terraforming [b]Nature Type:[/b] Steel [b]Description:[/b] One of the most powerful jutsu in the [color=ed1c24]Volcarona pokedex[/color]. An advanced form of Steel Release: Vein, Forest of Steel was originally utilized to create vast fields of metal that the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color] could feast on. Primarily used as a method to create a base of operations, or to replenish dwindling insect supplies. When used, large spears of steel erupt from the area, and can only be described as an alien forest. Roughly described as a forest of bare trees, all crafted from metal. Each spike capable of easily skewering an unprepared shinobi. [color=ed1c24]so basically Kimimaro's forest thing[/color] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Steel Release: Silver Powder [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] Mid-range [b]Nature Type:[/b] Steel [b]Description:[/b] Releasing a breath of steel into the area, small particles of a steel dust float around the area. Reflecting light, and being generally a nuisance to get in the eyes. Not a particularly powerful jutsu, but due to the [color=ed1c24]larvesta[/color]'s ability to track down metal by its scent, the powder can even act as a tracking agent. Or just really mess with the lungs. [/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=ed1c24]Most of this if fine. I'll judge the bugs when they're used in the IC. Expect rulings to happen from time to time, since I'm not completely sure how fights would go down with this.[/color] [/hider]