[@Zaphander] Alright, Personality is A-ok, you can add his emotions into it a little more if you want but not necessarily since we'll see him later in the rp IC. Background is a little out of this universe. His mother is a drug addict, alright but I don't know if we specifically call it that in this time period. Perhaps some other word that has to do with addiction. If you say drug addict I see it more as doing cocaine all day, get me?

His parents didn't love each other: That is a little strange, please change that. Idea: They loved each other for some time but found strange habits about each other that didn't click so divorced.

Food was a little bit easier to get when he learned how to hunt on his own: He adapted his skills his father had thought him to hunt in the wild. 

He found a dead body with remains that thought him about a place called Orth that possessed a unnaturally deep abyss. These founding made him all too curious about this place with these weird relics and this unnatural abyss. With no goal in life he had made his mind up to venture towards this so called Orth and make his living by going into the abyss. (Orth is on an island)

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I hope this helps to change it a bit. TY