Review is in [color=ed1c24]Red[/color]. [hider=Hōmuru][center][h2][i][color=ed1c24]Amon[/color][/i][/h2] [youtube]https://youtu.be/BMlGrE4348E[/youtube] [color=ed1c24]I'm not going to do the same meme as Volcarona, but you deserve it[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]https://i.imgur.com/U9nz0xI.png?1[/img] [color=ed1c24]definitely do[/color] [b][i]"It's not my place to judge a man's soul, I simply make the appointment [color=ed1c24]to remove their bending[/color]."[/i][/b][/center] [b]Name:[/b] [i][color=ed1c24]Amon[/color][/i] [b]Alias:[/b] [i]Hōmuru (葬る To [color=ed1c24]remove bending in a contrived way[/color])[/i] [b]Age:[/b] [i]21[/i] [b]Gender:[/b] [i]Male[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]Low-Jōnin ([color=ed1c24]Equalist[/color])[/i] [b]Sexuality:[/b] [i]Hetero[/i] [b]Nation:[/b] [i]The Empire of Stone[/i] [b]Birthplace:[/b] [i]Ran Musu - Vassal of the [color=ed1c24]Water tribe[/color][/i] [b]Alignment/Affiliation:[/b] [i][color=ed1c24]Yakone[/color][/i] [b]Organization:[/b] [i][color=ed1c24]Equalists[/color][/i] [b]Clan:[/b] [i]Kurogama[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Appearance:[/b] [i]As an ANBU operative, Jinzo is rarely seen without his issued uniform. Predominantly dark and plain, the most defining feature of this outfit is, of course, his pure, white [color=ed1c24]Amon[/color] mask adorned with a red circle positioned on the forehead. Small, intricate streaks of red also outline the contours of the face. Even when not on active duty, Jinzo prefers the sanctity of his mask. His face has not been seen by anyone outside of his direct superiors, even the Royal Family no nothing of his true identity [color=ed1c24]except they do, trust me[/color]. His rather modest attire affords him the ability to become indistinguishable amongst a crowd, aiding him greatly in his missions set forth by the Empire. Much like his wardrobe, Jinzo doesn't strike you as a very imposing figure. He stands up at 5'9 and walks around at a lean 155lbs. He bares some marks and scars here and there though nothing too defining or noticeable, not that you'd see them underneath his clothing anyway. He walks with a very slight gait, barely even noticeable really but gained from years spent awkwardly traversing devastated battlefields and carrying corpses. Whenever he moves it is usually with timed precision, Jinzo attempts to shed any waste from his movements so that he may always be first to the punch, should the situation ever call for it.[/i] [b]Personality:[/b] [i]Jinzo is a very focused person. He has clear goals and is quite determined to achieve them. He takes his orders seriously and aspires to become the most efficient ninja in his division. Where people are concerned, Jinzo doesn't shy away from interaction, though he doesn't generally go looking for it either. While, at times, he may prefer to keep himself secluded from everyone else, he always makes sure to join in on discussions about missions and objectives, even making the odd wisecrack or joke here and there [color=ed1c24]no pls no jokesters[/color]. If he has a particular opinion on something, he is more inclined to say it out loud rather than keep quiet about it, although not in a way that would seem brash and arrogant but more aloof or distant. He is loyal to his beliefs and his country in that he will defend them if questioned but not so extreme as to rear up in anger. Having grown up watching his father serve the Empire, Jinzo recognizes his place as a tool to be used and is content for things to be that way as he prides himself on his own diligence. Ever calm and collected, Jinzo prefers to keep a cool head during times of stress.[/i] [b]History/Background:[/b] [i]Death has surrounded Jinzo for as long as he can remember [color=ed1c24]born with an edgy, demon spoon in his mouth[/color]. Not in the usual dark or tragic way, however, even despite the loss of his mother, though that was before he could even remember. Maternity leave had to be cut short during times of war leading to his mother's eventual death on the battlefield mere months after giving birth [color=ed1c24]wooweeeeeeee[/color]. But this wasn't the kind of 'death' he was familiar with, for his father - Tenjin - worked as a Royal Mortician, which was merely a fancy way of saying 'body collector'. Day and night, once the battles between each side had been fought and far too many lives had been lost, Tenjin alongside dozens of others would scour the battlefield in order to retrieve weapons, valuables and, finally, the bodies of their fellow countrymen. [color=ed1c24]someone's gotta do it[/color] Jinzo would grow up to follow in his father's steps. After his enrollment in the Imperial Academy and subsequent graduation, a majority of Jinzo's missions as a Genin were mostly posted by the Royal Mortuary. His father, Tenjin, had earnt one or two promotions during his son's time at the academy that saw him elevated to the position of Mortuary Overseer. This gave him the power to specifically direct missions towards his son, given that he was merely a Genin. Tenjin's reasons for this were never explained until one incident occurred during a seemingly routine sweep of a recently deserted battlefield. Jinzo and his team stumbled across an enemy Chuunin amongst the littered bodies, who was heavily injured but still very much alive. Fight or flight reactions kicking in, the Kumo ninja immediately launched an attack against the trio [color=ed1c24]what a returd[/color], his speed and strength still more than a match for the three Genin even despite his grievous wounds [color=ed1c24]strongest chuunin in the world[/color]. It didn't take long for the man to dispatch of Jinzo's teammates, killing one and severely incapacitating the other. But just as he took a hold of Jinzo's neck, the shinobi's body began to succumb to its' injuries [color=ed1c24]i knew crystals sucked[/color]. Recognizing the opportunity, Jinzo plunged his kunai deep in between the man's ribs, who let out a guttural roar of pain and as the enemy Chuunin fell to his knees, Jinzo could almost sense his defeat. Which was about the time he noticed a strange phenomenon happening to the man's body; It had begun to crystallize until it was as hard as steel. Slowly but thoroughly his flesh continued to meta-morph, as the dying ninja could only cry out in pain, Jinzo still clung to him in horror before passing out. [color=ed1c24]they still suck[/color] He awoke to his father stood over him as he lay in a medical ward, a solemn look upon his face. Several other people had joined him, Elders of some kind. It was then that Tenjin explained his heritage as a member of the Kurogama clan, through his mother's side, and that he had manifested a rare [color=ed1c24]least rare KG in this rp apparently[/color] Kekkei Genkai known as Shōton; the Crystal Release nature transformation. This manifestation meant that he was destined for greater things, although his father had hoped against it. Jinzo was told how his mother was also a Shōton user and how she had commanded battlefields with her exemplary skill and power and had performed various feats that had earnt her the mantle of Kesshōken - The Crystal Fist. Tenjin had protested against the Elders, not wanting to lose his only son on the battlefield as well. [color=ed1c24]gives his son life threatening missions but rejects this? what a fucking cunt[/color] But the Elders of the Kurogama clan were fiercely loyal to the Empire. Originating from the Vassal-state of Ran Musu, the clan offered any member who had awakened the Shōton up as a tool to be used by the Empire [color=ed1c24]good[/color]. This was their way of paying the Emperor back for his leniency many years prior. And so Jinzo was taken from his father and forged into a weapon to be used by the Imperial Army. Over the course of a few years, Jinzo learnt how to better utilize his Kekkei Genkai he even began to invent his own jutsu. Along the way he was also recognized for his skill in counter-assassination. By protecting important members of the military from the shadows, Jinzo quickly learnt where and how an assassin would strike which would then enable him to take them out. His impressive success rate spoke volumes to the higher-ups and it wasn't long before he was hand-picked to join the Empire's Tiger Division; an elite group of shinobi formed to take on higher level missions both at home and abroad. [color=ed1c24]they're basically hunter-nins[/color] Most of his time leading up to the end of the war is classified. With the war now having ended, however, Jinzo only focuses on the next mission. Deserter, traitor or foreign target, he can only wait until he is called upon.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Equipment/Weapons/Items:[/b] [i]Generic Shinobi Tools, Kunai, Smoke Bombs,[/i] [b]Chakra Nature:[/b] [i]Doton - Earth Release Shōton - Crystal Release[/i] [u][b]Kekkei Genkai:[/b][/u] [i]Shōton - Crystal Release [sup](Custom Version)[/sup][/i] [i]Users of Crystal Release can convert varied amounts of solid matter into Crystal. From the Earth itself to other physical constructs, such as wood and metal, Crystal Release users can transform most of their immediate surroundings into weapons, shields and modes of transport. This extends to solid-state Chakra Natures such as Earth and Wood, rendering ninja of those Chakra Natures weak to this Kekkei Genkai. Crystal Release users can also manipulate pre-existing crystals and crystalline structures. Liquid-state natures such as Water, Lava and Storm Release each have an increased resistance to crystallization due to the more random molecular structure of their jutsu, making the conversion a much lengthier and far more taxing process. As such, Crystal Release users would likely opt against converting liquids due to the extra time and Chakra it would take with little to no advantages over converting solids. [color=ed1c24]cant convert actively harmful elements and attacks.[/color] Gaseous & Energy Chakra natures such as Wind, Boil, Scorch and Explosion Releases are significantly more resistant to crystallization due to the wild molecular structure of their jutsu, with Fire and Lightning remaining unaffected completely. This is because raw energy or chakra cannot be crystallized, as they have no physical mass to crystallize, allowing those with good chakra control or Lightning/Fire natures to counter it. Crystal Release is also susceptible to a specific sound wave frequency: because Crystal requires a very precise build-up of molecules, the proper sound waves can break down the build-up before the Crystal can properly form. When used on living beings, the crystallization rate is greatly reduced and the Chakra required vastly increased, more-so than any other state of matter, due to the innate Chakra stored within the targeted being. This gives all of the Crystal Release user's opponents a natural defense, since the Chakra itself cannot be crystallized and thus can only be contained by forcing the target's Chakra to the center of their mass by slowly converting their physical form from the outside in.[/i] [color=ed1c24]only crystallize people once you've defeated them, I don't want weird /massive damage/ out of nowehere[/color] [u][b]Special Traits:[/b][/u] [i]- Exceptional Chakra Reserves - Exceptional Stealth & Agility [color=ed1c24]he uses crystal release i dont think he'll be /exceptional/[/color] - Excellent Sight & Hearing - Excellent Reflexes - Excellent Taijutsu - Great Cunning - Great Chakra Control [/i] [u][b]Afflictions/Nerfs:[/b][/u] [i]N/A[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [hider=Canon Jutsu] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Hiding_Like_a_Mole_Technique]Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Double_Suicide_Decapitation_Technique]Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release_Barrier:_Earth_Prison_Dome_of_Magnificent_Nothingness]Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Pillar_Prison_Technique]Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Tearing_Earth_Turning_Palm]Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm[/url] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]A[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]All Ranges[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Offensive, Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]Jinzo can crystallize the ground beneath him, up to (1 acre) in radius from his position and up to (8ft) deep. Once crystallized, the pitch-black converted earth immediately becomes difficult to traverse, due to the glassy nature of Jinzo’s Crystals. Since the ground has now been infused with Jinzo’s Chakra, he is able to manipulate and distort the reflections of himself as well as his opponents so long as they are standing on Abyssal Onyx Mirror. Jinzo may also manipulate the ground at will, causing spikes and fissures to erupt from beneath the feet of his targets in order to impale, bind or otherwise hinder his enemies' movement. Activation of this Jutsu allows Jinzo to activate other Jutsu such as [u]Crystal Release: Black Burial Wave[/u] and [u]Onyx Crystal Clone Technique[/u].[/i] [b]Weakness:[/b] [i]Seeing as this Jutsu is particularly widespread, the durability of Jinzo's Abyssal Onyx Mirror is markedly less than that of his other Crystal constructs. As such, any A-Ranked (and above) Explosive or Blunt-force Jutsu that targets the ground directly can heavily damage or even destroy the Abyssal Onyx Mirror, converting the earth back to its' original state. Jutsu of the same type but lower in rank may take considerably more time and effort due to the sheer size of the Jutsu itself. Due to Crystal Release's inherent weakness to Fire and Lightning Chakra natures, even lower ranked Jutsu of these nature types may be able to discard of the Abyssal Onyx Mirror with relative ease. The sheer size of this jutsu gives it a vastly extended cast time (2 posts), whereby Jinzo must remain stationary as he crystallizes the ground beneath him. Any interruption made during the casting of this technique will cause it to fail instantly, wasting a massive amount of Chakra. In regards to dodging, the main things to dodge would be the spikes/fissures after the Jutsu has been cast, though they aren't instantaneous attacks. If anything they're supposed to be used to catch an opponent off-guard in order to setup for another attack or Jutsu. Therefore most, if not all, Chuunin-level ninja & above should be able to dodge them quite simply under completely normal circumstances. It's possible for an opponent to escape the crystallized area using whichever mobility/flight Jutsu they prefer or by simply climbing any structure or tree that might populate the area.[/i] [color=ed1c24]seems ok[/color] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Black Burial Wave[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]A[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Mid-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Offensive, Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]Jinzo may perform this Jutsu only once he has activated [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u]. Upon activation of this Jutsu, Jinzo's Crystals begin to envelop any opponent within range who is also touching Abyssal Onyx Mirror, immobilizing them almost instantaneously, all the while restricting the movement of their upper body as his Crystals begin to cover them entirely. Not only that, but the technique begins to slowly drag its' prey beneath the surface of Abyssal Onyx Mirror. Repeated struggling only seems to accelerate the process, whilst also enabling Jinzo to gradually crystallize his opponents by forcing the target's Chakra to the center of their mass and converting them from the outside in.[/i] [b]Weakness:[/b] [i]Due to this Jutsu's heavy dependency on [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u], Black Burial Wave can be destroyed alongside its' parent Jutsu. Not only that, but it is also far less durable than Abyssal Onyx Mirror, making it easily stopped by offensive Jutsu of lower ranks. Like all Crystal Release Jutsu, Black Burial Wave possesses an inherent weakness to Fire and Lightning Chakra natures.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Black Burial[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]A[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Short to Mid-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Offensive, Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]A scaled down version of [u]Crystal Release: Black Burial Wave[/u]. This version, however, doesn't require the activation of [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u]. Jinzo may perform this Jutsu on only one target within range, focusing most of his Chakra to increase its' speed and durability. First, Jinzo must calculate the exact position of his opponent before crystallizing the ground beneath them. As soon as his opponents touch the crystallized ground, the Jutsu begins to envelop them, gradually immobilizing them as his Crystals grow further and further. Once the target is stopped, the Jutsu may then begin to drag its' prey beneath the surface of the Earth. Repeated struggling only seems to accelerate the process, whilst also enabling Jinzo to gradually crystallize his opponents by forcing the target's Chakra to the center of their mass and converting them from the outside in.[/i] [color=ed1c24]same as i said about turning people into crystal. lame gimmick, full paralysis or external damage is fine[/color] [b]Weakness:[/b] [i]Despite being far more durable than [u]Crystal Release: Black Burial Wave[/u], Black Burial is still susceptible to Explosive and Blunt-force Jutsu of equal or greater rank. Not only this, but the concentration required to predict where a target is going to be remains rather challenging and, as such, opponents that are able to move at high-speeds are particularly difficult to catch using this jutsu. Like all Crystal Release Jutsu, Black Burial possesses an inherent weakness to Fire and Lightning Chakra natures.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Onyx Crystal Clone Technique[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]B[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Mid-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]By using either [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u] or [u]Crystal Release: Onyx Crystal Mirror[/u] as a medium, Jinzo can make clones of himself emerge from their mirrored surfaces. Due to being made of Crystal, they can endure more damage than a Shadow Clone. These clones are also able to deceive Byakugan users because of their reflective nature, but by focusing their sight, this can be circumvented.[/i][color=f26522]elemental clones are A rank. For good reason.[/color] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Onyx Crystal Dragon[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]B[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Long-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Offensive, Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]Jinzo uses crystallized earth to create a large serpent-like dragon, which he then uses as a means to travel. When used offensively, Jinzo can create multiple dragons to attack or bind his opponents from multiple directions. When used in conjunction with [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u], Jinzo can create several more dragons albeit at a much smaller size. The technique is generally used this way to combat multiple opponents at once.[/i] [b]Weakness:[/b] [i]Jinzo can only create up to (3) dragons when used normally. When used with Abyssal Onyx Mirror, he can create up to (9). Like all Crystal Release Jutsu, Onyx Crystal Dragon possesses an inherent weakness to Fire and Lightning Chakra natures.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Onyx Chrysalis[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]B[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Short-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Defensive[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]Jinzo uses this technique to envelop himself in dense Onyx Crystals in order to protect himself. This is easily his most durable technique and may even withstand attacks from some offensive Jutsu of higher ranks. Once the danger has passed, Jinzo can discard the technique at will. When used in conjunction with [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u], the cast time is moderately reduced. However, what Jinzo makes up in cast time, he sacrifices in durability.[/i] [b]Weakness:[/b] [i]This particular Jutsu renders Jinzo stationary, forcing him to try and withstand an attack head on. Despite its' high durability factor, Onyx Chrysalis can still be heavily affected by Fire & Lightning Jutsu and, in some cases, even completely destroyed. The cast time for this Jutsu is not instantaneous, meaning that Jinzo could not use Onyx Chrysalis as a last resort block. The Crystals themselves take time to completely envelop Jinzo due to their density.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Onyx Crystal Mirror[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]C[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Mid-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Defensive, Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]Jinzo creates a large pitch-black mirror which he can then use to perform the [u]Onyx Crystal Clone Technique[/u]. This technique may also be used in a defensive manner by Jinzo to confuse his opponents mid-attack, by materializing the Onyx Crystal Mirror directly in front of his own position or that of his opponent's, showing either party's reflection as dictated by him.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Onyx Armour[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]C[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Short-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Offensive, Defensive[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]This technique allows Jinzo to cover his skin with a thin sheet of Crystal that improves his defense against physical attacks. This armour can also aid him to perform stronger physical attacks. The Crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it.[/i] [color=ed1c24]considering this weaker than Kakuzu's earth spear defense and power with same weakensses[/color] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Onyx Armour - Abyssal Gauntlets[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]C[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Short-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Offensive[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]An advanced version of [u]Crystal Release: Onyx Armour[/u], Jinzo creates a pair of dense Crystal gauntlets that greatly increase the power of his melee strikes.[/i] [b]Weakness:[/b] [i]This jutsu possesses a time limit for how long they can be used. The gauntlets also take damage reflective of how much power is used per strike. Their damage output is reduced when used against Fire or Lightning Jutsu.[/i] ----------------------------------------------------------- [b]Name:[/b] [i]Crystal Release: Onyx Crystal Tunneling[/i] [b]Rank:[/b] [i]D[/i] [b]Range:[/b] [i]Long-Range[/i] [b]Nature:[/b] [i]Shōton[/i] [b]Type:[/b] [i]Supplementary[/i] [b]Effect:[/b] [i]Jinzo surrounds himself with Chakra before tunneling beneath the ground, by crystallizing it, to reach a new position of his choosing. This Jutsu affords Jinzo a relative amount of stealth depending on how deep he decides to tunnel as well as a very effective means of escape. Jinzo may also use this Jutsu in conjunction with [u]Crystal Release: Abyssal Onyx Mirror[/u]. When he chooses to do so, the speed and stealth of his relocation is greatly improved, giving some of Jinzo's opponents the impression that he is capable of teleportation.[/i] ====================================================== [/hider] [color=ed1c24]Overall the character's alright. Crystal release is general pretty fucking gay, Ice turned earthen type of shit. But anyway, handle this clone issue and probably remove one of the burial things, two is redundant anyway. After that? Approved.[/color] [/hider] [hr] [@BladeSS4] Updates are good, you're approved. [hr] [hider][color=black] [CENTER][img]http://i.imgur.com/NhjzwdK.png[/img] [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQSCnVpV6Ns[/youtube] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]http://pre08.deviantart.net/ca77/th/pre/f/2015/243/c/b/no_loyalty_no_honor_by_zweihander_k-d97v3a1.jpg[/img] [color=ed1c24]edo tensei is banned[/color] --------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/Center][/Color] [color=black]【[U]Full Name[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Uragiri Sakana[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][color=ed1c24]pink[/color]eye[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Gender[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Male[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Age[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]16[/i][/indent] [color=ed1c24]why is he so young omg get with the program[/color] [color=black]【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Early-mid teens[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Sexuality[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Heterosexual - no real interest in romance in the traditional sense of going out and dating, probably more reliant on his investment in fate to guide him to his partner (if there exists one). [color=ed1c24]so, gay[/color][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Village[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/c/c9/Kumogakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20110124122229[/img] [s][b]Kumogakure no Sato[/b][/s] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a5/Iwagakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222812[/img] [b]Iwagakure[/b][/i][/indent] [color=ed1c24]good choice[/color] [color=black]【[U]Birthplace[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][b][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/c/c9/Kumogakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20110124122229[/img] [b]Kumogakure no Sato[/b][/b][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][list][*][img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/c/c9/Kumogakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20110124122229[/img] [s][b]Kumohagakure no Sato[/b][/s] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/a5/Iwagakure_Symbol.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/25?cb=20090830222812[/img] [b]Iwagakure[/b] [*] Uragiri ichizoku[/list][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Uragiri Clan[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Rank[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Chunin[/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】[/color] [indent][i][list]Primary:[indent] [img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Katon[/b].[/indent] Secondary: [indent][img]https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton.[/b][/indent] Tertiary: [indent][img]https://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/52/Nature_Icon_Earth.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012162502[/img] [b]Doton.[/b][/indent][/list][/i][/indent] [color=black]【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Sakana frequently dresses in more or less standard Iwahagakure garb for chunin. He prefers to wear black wifebeaters with his flak vest over it, with skin tight gloves that reach all the way up to his biceps. It leaves just a tiny bit of his shoulder uncovered. Similarly his gloves have finger cutouts so he can still use his feeling senses to work. Not like Shinobi are known for their understanding of fingerprints anyway, so it's not like he has to worry about leaving fingerprints during his work. [color=ed1c24]just for that they're now a thing[/color] He wears the standard shinobi slacks with shinobi footwear. It's standard issue and thus, standard wear for him. During his freetime he slips into something more casual like a sweater and slacks, but overall he doesn't really find himself pre-occupied with fashion. On the other hand he takes good care of his body - not just in terms of fitness, but also in less direct ways. Combing his hair, washing it, all that stuff is something Sakana (and the entire Uragiri clan for that matter) takes great care and pride in. Something interesting for you to know, I suppose.[/i][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=black]【[U]Personality[/U]】[/color] [indent][i]Sakana is somewhat of an asshole [color=ed1c24]straight to the odin archetype[/color] to those that aren't used to him. He has a rather straightforward approach to everything because in his eyes and mind the outcome is already predetermined by the Sage of the Six Paths, and therefore being courteous, subtle or anything but direct will only lead to a waste of time. Of course, some people's fate is to be subtle and courteous - but there's a difference between being who you are, and falsely being friendly, coy or diplomatic. If you want something - ask for it. If you are going to do something - do it. This goes for anything - from setting a cup of tea to calligraphy to killing a man. It is no surprise that this siphoned into his personality - he is straight forward, direct and will generally do what he wants whether you approve or disprove of it. Fate is sealed - fighting it only makes you worse at your job. It is a philosophy that is otherwise not very prevalent in Konohagakure - or even the Uragiri clan as a whole - but it is one he came to after deep pondering with a much older, experienced man who said he has seen the Sage of the Six Paths himself after a session of deep meditation. He told Sakana of fate and it's connection to the sage and the wheels of time - was there really any other conclusion to draw than 'fate is sealed'? [color=ed1c24]he's blunt and stubborn, then[/color] Although Sakana is far from a bloodthirsty shinobi who has no problems killing and who doesn't feel a shred of emotion whenever a companion or enemy dies, he is certainly not a very emotional person and thus has no quarrel in committing the act itself. [b]Fate is sealed[/b] after all and death is part of fate. Separation of emotion from work is a very dangerous thing and Sakana realizes that - but separation of emotion from fate is entirely natural. For fate to occur is natural and so are emotions, but to link them is intrinsically useless and brings nothing to the table.[/i][/indent] [color=ed1c24]and a bit of a sociopath[/color] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=black]【[U]History[/U]】[/color] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/t2C0C59.png[/img] [sub]Uragiri clan symbol[/sub][/center] [indent][i][b]Sakana was born in the tumultuous lands of the Raijin dynasties, into a live of poverty and tribal powerstruggles [color=ed1c24]that's because he was white lbr[/color]. Much of his youth was characteristically bland, as he followed the path of so many other Uragiri before him, joining the ranks of the many soldiers of Iwagakure [color=ed1c24]do you mean kumo[/color]. The Uragiri provided bland, but hardy soldiers to fill the ranks with. His early life followed that trend exactly, becoming a shinobi early on and doing his best to support the tribe and the king of thunder. During his time in the equal of the shinobi academy within the Raijin dynasties, he excelled in sealing jutsu, as well as sparring and more theoretical studies such as history and religion. His genin years were characterized by strive with his teammates, one of which was the heir to a local noble clan and tribal leader. Fate had been decided that day, but Sakana didn’t know it yet. During the war effort later, this conflict came to a high and Sakana challenged the heir to a duel to prove his strength, as was custom in the Raijin dynasties. Amidst spectators the two fought, the battle not going in either’s favour until the heir got a solid hit in on Sakana’s legs and brought him down, and rather than kill him, he spared Sakana’s life – one would think this was mercy, but to Sakana it was worse. [color=ed1c24]git gud pleb[/color] He was branded with a large, black X over his right eye, marking him as a banished shinobi and effectively making him free game for Kumogakure shinobi. After a three day grace period he was officially scrapped from the ranks of the Kumogakure forces, seemingly never having been a shinobi at all. [color=ed1c24]wrong hood[/color] Luckily for Sakana he found a group of Iwagakure shinobi two days travel away from the Kumo lines, and convinced them to take him in. Originally sceptical, they noticed his seals and instead of scepticism saw a chance to earn a solid shinobi for their armies. Little did they know that he was more than proficient after a life of being hardened in the Raijin dynasties, and he soon earned himself the rank of Chunin. After the war effort he was officially placed in charge of a selection of two other chunin, sent to Amegakure as part of a diplomatic envoy, but that would soon turn to a whole different mission. [color=ed1c24]chad empire vs virgin tribes[/color][/b][/i][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=black]【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】[/color] [hider=Two knives][indent][u]Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent]Knives x2[/indent] [u]Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ[/u] [indent][url=http://www.munemasa.co.jp/pic-labo/2007-302-850.jpg]Straight edge knife, corded handle[/url][/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]These are two blades made of steel that can be infused (through the Hien/Flying Swallow technique) to sharpen their properties and make them more deadly. There are two seals, one on the handle of each knife, for use with the Fuinjutsu: Osu and Fuinjutsu: Hiku techniques. Besides that, they have no real 'special' properties.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [color=black]【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】[/color] [hider=Dao][indent][u]Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent]Dao[/indent] [u]Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ[/u] [indent][url= https://i.pinimg.com/originals/de/05/72/de05721c077b90dc65652d2448d107c0.jpg]Straight edge dao[/url][/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]A simple dao with no defining techniques or special variables. It’s strong and can withstand combat against other regular strong weapons, but techniques with enhanced weaponry or so will chew through it easily.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][u]Ｓ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Reverse_Four_Symbols_Sealing]Ura Shishō Fūin[/url] [sub]Willing to remove if necessary but the jutsu is so remarkably useless for a roleplay/a character, and I like the jutsu for exposition and flair.[/sub][/indent] [color=ed1c24]keep it only as some plot-convenient suicide ability. dont use in pvp, even if you're about to die, unless you opponent wants it.[/color] [u]Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fire_Destruction][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Katon:[/b] Gōka Messhitsu [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fire_Annihilation][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Katon:[/b] Gōka Mekkyaku[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning_Technique]Kuchiyose no Jutsu [See details in lower section][/url] [sub]A rank for the size of the creature - the actual technique naturally isn't an A rank.[/sub][/indent] [u]Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fire_Annihilation][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Katon:[/b] Gōka Mekkyaku [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth-Style_Rampart][img]https://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/52/Nature_Icon_Earth.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012162502[/img] [b]Doton:[/b] Doryū Jōheki [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Thousand_Flying_Water_Needles_of_Death][img]https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton:[/b] Sensatsu Suishō[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Flying_Swallow]Hien[/url] [b]Fūinjutsu:[/b] Atsui! atsui! atsui![/indent] [u]Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fireball_Technique][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Katon:[/b] Gōkakyū no Jutsu[/url] [img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Sūpu-jutsu:[/b] Sutōbu o tentō [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Snake%27s_Mouth][img]https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton:[/b] Ja no Kuchi [/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_Hiding_in_Rain_Technique][img]https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Suiton:[/b] Amegakure no Jutsu[/url] [img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Sūpu-jutsu:[/b] Sūpu mizu [img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/52/Nature_Icon_Earth.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012162502[/img] [b]Sūpu-jutsu:[/b] Bōru[/indent] [b]Fūinjutsu:[/b] Osu [b]Fūinjutsu:[/b] Hiku [u]Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Shelter][img]https://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/52/Nature_Icon_Earth.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012162502[/img] [b]Doton:[/b] Earth Shelter[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Fire_Dragon_Bullet][img]https://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Katon:[/b] Karyūdan[/url][/indent][/indent] [color=black]| Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |[/color] [hider=Sūpu-jutsu: Bōru][indent][u]Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/5/52/Nature_Icon_Earth.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012162502[/img] [b]Sūpu-jutsu:[/b] Bōru[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｋ[/u] [indent]C[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｇｅ[/u] [indent]Up to 20 meters.[/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]This Doton technique forms the basis of a three-nature combination. The Bowl jutsu causes the target to be encased in a dome of earth around them, which then lifts up off of the earth on four earthen pillars. The jutsu is simple. There really isn't much to it - it doesn't kill, damage, or harm you, it just traps you inside the dome. That's bad, right? Well you can break free. Use S, A, B, or C-rank lightning based jutsu's to break through, or use sheer force if you're really that strong. Just do it in time before the next part of the combo.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Sūpu-jutsu: Sūpu mizu][indent][u]Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent][img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] [b]Sūpu-jutsu:[/b] Sūpu mizu[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｋ[/u] [indent]C[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｇｅ[/u] [indent]Up to 20 meters.[/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]This Suiton based jutsu is the next step. Thought being trapped in a dome of earth was bad enough? WRONG! Through a hole in the top of the dome that briefly opens at the command of the user, the user then spews water into the 'soup bowl' until it's full of water. Congratulations, you'll now be drowning! Since this is a suiton jutsu, you could possibly use wind to create a bubble of air for yourself to breathe, though it's not drowning you need to worry about. At this stage of the combo it becomes more or less impossible to use electricity to free yourself from the dome as you'd electrocute yourself. Unless you're willing to risk that. Sheer force would still be enough to break free, but since water slows down movement, it'd likely have to come from the outside. Or another solution. Maybe you can think of something. Better hurry before the next step, which is.. [/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Sūpu-jutsu: Sutōbu o tentō][indent][u]Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent][img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/b/bf/Nature_Icon_Fire.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012120333[/img] [b]Sūpu-jutsu:[/b] Sutōbu o tentō[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｋ[/u] [indent]C[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｇｅ[/u] [indent]Up to 20 meters.[/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]The final step in the three jutsu combo. True to it's name, this is the step that probably is the most dangerous for whomever gets trapped. Using the Katon nature, the user lights a fire underneath the earthen soup bowl/dome that they created, beginning to boil it at an alarming and dangerous rate for whomever is inside. Drown in the soup made of your own body! Muahaha! Ahem. There is no real defence for this step, if you are trapped. For outsiders it's possible to blow out the fire using wind jutsu, to quench it with a water jutsu, or to simply free those in the bowl with force. Electricity is possible but ill-advised since you'd probably electrocute your friends inside the bowl. [color=ed1c24]can just use bombs to get out y'know[/color] [/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Fūinjutsu: Atsui! atsui! atsui!][indent][u]Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent][b]Fūinjutsu:[/b] Atsui! atsui! atsui![/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｋ[/u] [indent]B[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｇｅ[/u] [indent]Close-medium[/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]The user seals or gets sealed 3 seals on their tongue, namely the characters for 'atsui' (熱い) meaning 'hot'. These seals contain fire jutsu up to the B rank [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fire_Annihilation]Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku[/url] (can contain smaller ones like the regular [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fireball_Technique]Gōkakyū no Jutsu[/url]). Due to the small size of the seals, the jutsu are not quite as large as your average great fire annihilation, but the flames burn just as hot. The technique is easily hidden and it'd require some real good eyesight to see these seals. Similarly, because the jutsu uses a standard jutsu, it is not quite apparent that they're using sealing to be used, and it's easy to mistake these for a jutsu being used without handseals. As such, finding out that seals are used in this technique will be extremely hard for anyone that doesn't have specifically good eyesight. The seals are activated by flowing jutsu to them to 'unfurl' them, and then allows the user to spew out the technique. [/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Fūinjutsu: Osu][indent][u]Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent][b]Fūinjutsu:[/b] Osu[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｋ[/u] [indent]C[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｇｅ[/u] [indent]10m/100m[/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]Using two seals, one on each hand, the user can push (osu) away items that have been either a) touched or b) had a seal placed on them. The push is relatively weak and can be used to subtly move hands or fists used in an attack (as an example) to dodge it (if the hands or whatever other item has been touched before). The effect is more profound and strong on the knives, since those have been sealed prior to the events taking place and had more chakra infused on them, raising the range up to 100m.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [hider=Fūinjutsu: Hiku][indent][u]Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent][b]Fūinjutsu:[/b] Hiku[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｋ[/u] [indent]C[/indent] [u]Ｒａｎｇｅ[/u] [indent]10m[/indent] [u]Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ[/u] [indent]Using two seals, one on each hand, the user can pull (hiku) in items that have been either a) touched or b) had a seal placed on them. The pull is stronger than the push. This does little to enhance the actual effects of combat, though perhaps it can be used to pull incoming fists into his hands. More likely, it is used to pull his knives back towards him in a range of up to 10m. It’s an auxiliary, powerless but very useful technique. [/indent][/indent][/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [hider=Axu the Axolotl][indent][u]Ｎａｍｅ[/u] [indent]Axu[/indent] [u]Ｓｐｅｃｉｅｓ ａｎｄ ｓｉｚｅ[/u] [indent][url=https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Axolotl]Axu is an axolotl[/url] of about 1.5 meters high, and five meters long. However, most of that is his tail. He is a bright orange with black drawings all over his body in various shapes, most notably a marking on the front of his head that reads 'Axu' in kanji. This marking seems to be entirely natural and it seems to be the case that he was named after this shape.[/indent] [u]Ｐｏｗｅｒｓ ａｎｄ ｃａｐａｂｉｌｉｔｉｅｓ [/u] [indent]Axu has the 'power' to produce a large amount of water from his throat by using his chakra, producing either a steady high pressure stream of water or a large waterball. Furthermore, his aquatic nature as a newt means he's extremely capable in the water and can swim extremely fast - while he is much, much slower on land. Lastly, as is the nature of axolotls, he has an extremely fast regeneration rate that he can use to heal himself (and only himself, never anyone else) extremely quickly to mend broken bones, tails that were cut off or even arms. If you want to kill him for sure, cut off the head. Lastly he can fit up to three people in his mouth if they sit down.[/indent][/indent][/hider] [color=ed1c24]Very little to say about this character. Overall balanced, may need to be careful on the push/pull seals as they have a lot of potential. Most of it is completely fine. Approved.[/color][/hider] Doing the rest soon, need a little break.