[quote=@Kipsateking]
[@Legion02] looks good, though I'm a bit worried that we now have two magic dominated nations with lots of slaves, we will have to work to differentiate them more when we start playing but I'm sure that won't be a problem so I don't see a need for anyone to change anything.
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I understand the worry. Though let me point out a few differences. First of all, I'd say that on the scale of magical prowess the Sorcerer-Kings are far stronger than the average Ascendancy mage. Furthermore, it would appear that the Sorcerer-Kings during war, stay behind the battle lines and let slaves, abominations and other monsters do the dirty work. This is in stark contrast of the average Battle-Mage. Who is a highly trained, highly disciplined warrior.

[b]EDIT:[/b] In general, I think the Ascendancy mostly looks like Drunken Conquistador's faction before the destruction of his lands. Which might be an interesting plot point in of itself.