[@Chicken], the skill and attribute line-up looks good. The Yokudan language won't come up too often, but that doesn't mean it won't ever be used. I would keep it, since it is something that's likely to be unique to your character.

1H and 2H sword skills depend on what your character's trained with and the style she favors. If she wants to fully take advantage of the flexibility of her sword, than having both styles is the way to go. What you have so far (expert 2H and apprentice 1H) suggests that she fights with a two-handed grip more often. Also, there's an abundance of 1H sword experts coming from chapter 1, so a 2H expert is better for variety.

Like what Dervish said, you don't need to cover everything with the skill points. Some side talents in speech and lockpicking are perfectly fine without being on the list. You may even have the chance to upgrade certain skills if you find your character frequently dealing with them.

The application looks great overall; you have my approval. Just wait for [@Peik] and [@Dervish] to clear you and you can post it to the characters tab.