Well, I'm gonna wait for the third person in charge to inspect my sheet, but I'll be doing some re-reading of the first page lore and the Chapter 1 summary once it's up. Thus far, given the opinions expressed, I'll leave my sheet as is unless you folks notice something that merits changing. (I'll do some grammar / spelling sweeps through it, too.)

I do plan on reading up on the characters that are already here, too!