Okay, I've adjusted the plot (grammar and consistencies mostly), drawn up a list of items, inserted a new affiliation (Gamma Mechanised Infantry), posted three different vehicle selections for said new affiliation to start with, but also for other people to find as the RP progresses. The first post of this interest check will now be the RP summary, and I will update it as often as I can until it is complete. 

The hard parts are all done now though, it's just a matter of me sitting down and going toe to toe with my keyboard. Hopefully tomorrow will see the final draft. 

Special thanks to Tearstone for creating the weapons.