Reviews are in [color=ed1c24]Red[/color]. [hider=Soryu Shinano] [CENTER] [I][url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GNtzmOliIos]Bahasa Palus[/url][/I] [color=ed1c24]good choice[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]http://safebooru.org//images/2074/973cc930a4d3ebdd7fd14c2d737016626a132092.jpg?2162571[/img] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Full Name[/U]】 Soryu Shinano 【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】 The Blue Dragon of the Leaf [color=ed1c24]original as shit[/color] So-kun [color=ed1c24]pronounced succ-un[/color] 【[U]Gender[/U]】 Male 【[U]Age[/U]】 26 【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】 Mid 20's 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 Hetero [color=ed1c24]its a shame most animu pics contradict this[/color] 【[U]Village[/U]】 Konohagakure 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 Konohagakure 【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】 Konohagakure 【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】 Shinano - An obscure, formerly noble bloodline with origins in what is now known as the Land of Bones. [color=ed1c24]spooky foreshadowing yes yes, subtle[/color] 【[U]Rank[/U]】 Jonin 【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】 Wind 【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】 Soryu easily stands out from most crowds due to not only his bright blue hair and golden eyes [color=ed1c24]this doesn't 'stand out' in animu land son[/color] but the dignified fashion in which he carries himself [color=ed1c24]idem[/color]. He only stands at an average height and while his body is toned and athletic it is often concealed by the standard Konoha uniform and flak jacket so truly it is his handsome [color=ed1c24]mlady[/color] face and unique hair that would get him the most attention. When not on-duty he often wears casual and lazy clothes, such as t-shirts and jeans, though he never wears any headgear. His Konoha forehead protector is worn around his left bicep like an armband, if he's even wearing it. As a whole Soryu appears as a man who could stand out far more than he does if he desired, a remnant of his royal bloodline [color=ed1c24]royal to what? the six acre empire of blue fags?[/color]. One could mistake him for a model of some kind if they met him without knowing anything about him. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Personality[/U]】 Without even opening his mouth one can begin to assess what Soryu is like. His posture and body language practically radiates charisma. When he smiles it appears friendly and genuine. When he ponders it appears as if his thoughts are deep and poetic. When he moves it appears graceful and dignified. [color=ed1c24]all this poise to say he's a fucking poser ugh, reminds me of spanner's jihad against punctuation[/color] Soryu is a man that is capable, both physically and socially. Easy to befriend and trust, easy to listen to; he makes a great person to hold a conversation with even for small talk. For all the outwardly positive traits he seems to have, deep down Soryu is a calculated person with a very potent mask. Always wary of those around him, he absorbs as much information as he can from those he meets to keep a mental profile of all potential allies and enemies. Though he lacks ambition he finds drive in the thrill of the shinobi lifestyle. Combat and outwitting stronger opponents gives him the motivation to carry on. Though he is a capable man he knows his limits and his weaknesses, which is why he often avoids positions of leadership [color=ed1c24]good, i hate ooc leadership tug of wars[/color]. Being responsible for other people is something he doesn't believe he is good at, though he is confident that he can operate effectively under any leader himself. An effective lone wolf but a powerful teammate, Soryu is also quick to understand the skills of his allies (and his enemies). At the end of the day, Soryu seems almost like a man who could be larger-than-life with a little push in the right direction and he seems to know this. But the secrets that he keeps and his own shortsighted desires hold him back from becoming a cult of personality, for better or for worse. [color=ed1c24]tl;dr he's a frat boy with ninja powers and hates responsibility[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]History[/U]】 Born to the Shinano household, located in the heart of Konohagakure long after taking refuge from their previous land, Soryu was raised on the ideology of birthrights and fate. That one day his family would regain power in the Land of Bones and birth a new nation [color=f7976a]nice meme[/color], and that Soryu or one of his descendants could be the one to do this. Visions of grandeur and hollow talks of vengeance echoed throughout the halls of the Shinano mansion throughout his youth. The borderline brainwashing held no effect over Soryu despite his family's best efforts to raise him to be like them. A fruitless plan by people who would never actually take action, all over a desolate land that will never be restored, did not appeal to him even from a young age. [color=ed1c24]who the fuck would want to rule a place called 'land of bones' anyway? jesus[/color] The meaningless life presented to him left much to be desired. He couldn't care less over what bloodlines meant or what happened in history long past. Soryu lived in the present and he needed to find something to alleviate the lethal boredom of a forgotten clan trying to cling to life. The great war that had been raging since long before he was born was a point of interest to him from a very young age and largely motivated him to attend the Ninja Academy and become a shinobi. His father allowed him to do this under the pretense that these skills he would learn would one day bring the Shinano clan's secret plot to fruition [color=ed1c24]its a coup d'etat and this guy's older brother kills them all[/color], that Soryu was the one destined to restore their royalty and lead them "back" to greatness. Unfortunately for his father, Soryu never intended to help his family in their plight. He was far more selfish than that. Rather, he became a shinobi to give his life true meaning. He had always lived in the moment and the action and promise of a thrilling and dangerous job appealed to him. Soryu was a promising student, near the top of his class [color=ed1c24]he's not even a jock, he's a top tier prep, kaiba jack atlas levels[/color] in marks and well connected with his classmates socially. Many of the adults thought his attitude would change, if not completely break, once he actually was sent off to fight in the war instead of training in the safety and comfort of Konoha. After all, Soryu led an easy life devoid of tragedy or challenge. His family wasn't murdered, he wasn't scarred, he never went hungry, and never even particularly faced physical pain. Had he not gone to the war as a genin he could've perhaps lived his whole life in the comfort of the Shinano mansion, pretending that he would one day act upon dated vengeance and subsisting on boredom. Instead he challenged himself. [color=ed1c24]absolute douchebag[/color] His first battle was a bloody one, with his squad assisting Kumo forces in defending an outpost near their border with the Land of Bones. One of his genin squadmates was killed, along with a dozen Kumo shinobi and dozens of Kumo soldiers. Soryu himself received only some bruising and exhaustion, and though the battle was a loss and they had to retreat he had distinguished himself already with his efforts. He never stood out like a prodigy and thus nobody had high expectations of him, but how well he defended himself and the fact that he managed to recover his squadmate's body earned him praise. This was the beginning of what would become a solid career for Soryu. He was a quick learner and adapted very well to whatever he was told to do. After being promoted to chuunin he became known for his dependability and flexibility. He was assigned many missions for the duration of the war, which many were successful and kept him in the favor of Konoha's leaders. [color=ed1c24]did a cool at war, commended, saw some shit. ok[/color] Not many people would bring up Soryu when talking about war heroes [color=ed1c24]cuz he's one of too many[/color]. Most Konoha shinobi know him but his lack of flashy and distinguishing feats [color=ed1c24]basically he's boring[/color] would make many consider infamous prodigies and clever leaders to be the real heroes of Konoha's forces. Though some have given him recognition for his consistent performance over the years, enough so that he was promoted to jonin after the war had ended. After he returned home to Konohagakure for good, his family once again approached him to suggest he use his clout as a jonin and a war veteran to begin cozying up to Konoha figureheads for ill intentions. Soryu finally made his own intentions clear to his family and said he would do what he wants, though he wished them good luck on their endeavors (if only in a sarcastic way). What he originally sought to escape had begun to haunt him again with the end of the war: boredom. There were no foes to challenge him, no obstacles to overcome. Though he had friends to spend time with and the occasional assignment he was left feeling without a purpose... Until it was time to explore the New Continent. [color=ed1c24]weeee[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Special Traits[/U]】 + Versatile + Intelligent and devious + Adaptable + Skilled in using many weapons and tools + Physically capable and skilled at martial arts + Respectable stealth [color=ed1c24]no[/color] + Charismatic 【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】 -TBD -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】 [hider=Weapons][i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Ryu-ha [u]Description:[/u] A wakizashi with a black hilt and saya, indistinguishable from normal swords other than the Shinano family crest it bears at the top of the saya. Made of very high quality steel and sharpened with care, this sword would be sold for a very high price. However, this weapon isn't particularly special other than being more durable than the average wakizashi. [u]Appearance:[/u] A short sword with a slight curve, ordained with a plain black hilt. [/I] [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Longbow [u]Description:[/u] A recurve bow made of wood. Standard by design with a hefty draw weight of 100lbs, it can launch arrows out to 350m though Soryu's accuracy at that range is questionable. He is very accurate with it out to 150m though. Kept on his back, along with a quiver of eight broadhead arrows and two exploding arrows. [color=ed1c24]pales next to boshu's js' pleblord[/color] [u]Appearance:[/u] It's a bow, dude. [/I] [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Steel Knuckles [u]Description:[/u] Like brass knuckles, but made of steel to be more durable and heavy. Using them slows Soryu's punches only slightly but increases his striking power significantly. [u]Appearance:[/u] This isn't a tough one. [/I] [i] [u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] Standard shinobi equipment [u]Description:[/u] Shuriken, kunai, wire, smoke bombs, and explosive tags all stored in various pouches located along Soryu's belt when in uniform. [u]Appearance:[/u] bruh [/I] [/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [I]Jutsu:[/I] [hider=Canon Jutsu] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning_Technique]Summoning Technique[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Blade]Wind Release: Vacuum Blade[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Air_Bullets]Wind Release: Air Bullets[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Breakthrough]Wind Release: Breakthrough[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Rotating_Shuriken]Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Swift_Wind_Wall]Swift Wind Wall[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Genjutsu_Binding]Genjutsu Binding[/url] [color=ed1c24]dont spam pls[/color] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Demonic_Illusion:_False_Surroundings_Technique]Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique[/url] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Wind Release: Airflow Sensing Technique [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Long [b]Nature Type:[/b] Wind [b]Description:[/b] After completing the required handseals, Soryu takes a deep breath. Once he exhales he releases his chakra into the air around him in the form of wind and scatters it in every direction. This allows him to sense all physical objects out to approximately two hundred meters on a windless day. The reliability of this technique is somewhat impacted by weather, as rain or snow will hinder his range while a strong breeze will increase it in the direction of the breeze but decrease it upwind. It takes about twenty seconds to reach the full range of his technique and he will generally continue detection for another twenty seconds before his chakra disperses too much and he can no longer feel it anymore. [color=ed1c24]ok sensory[/color][/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 【[U]Summon[/U]】 [u]Name:[/u] Yatagarasu [u]Abilities:[/u] Though he can be summoned in the middle of combat, Yatagarasu (often just called "Yata" for short) is much better suited for a support role. He can fly and scout an area, which is useful in tandem with his ability to telepathically communicate both what he says and what he sees with an intended partner (Soryu in most cases). Aside from intelligence gathering he also has the ability to shed some of his feathers and create a down with healing properties, capable of healing minor wounds almost instantly and rejuvenating stamina. Obviously limited in use for the limited amount of feathers, generally allowing only one use per week. [color=ed1c24]crow that heals. next up a whale that suckerpunches[/color] [u]Appearance:[/u] A three-legged crow only slightly larger than a normal bird. Its feathers are dark and rugged. While it is missing its left eye, the right eye has a yellow glow that shines in stark contrast to its otherwise dark figure. [/center] Character's fine. Not much to say, as I predicted. Approved.[/hider] [hr] [color=ed1c24]jesus christ you have like 10 spaces here[/color] [center][hider=Kurosawa, Miyako] [CENTER][URL=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lfKrjZWG09c]Arithmophobia[/URL] [color=ed1c24]good choice plebian[/color][/CENTER] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [hider= Miyako][img]https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/336749173040873472/439866171769225217/20130116133934_y5hYE.jpg[/img] [/hider] [color=9e0b0f]and here comes the edge. the last portion of my last review involved a crow. and now its an edgedark crow girl[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Full Name[/U]】[/color] Kurosawa, Miyako [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】[/color] Kuro [color=ed1c24]i said something about j8's originality but wow this is top tier here. is here sister called shiro by any chance[/color] [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Gender[/U]】[/color] Female [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Age[/U]】[/color] 18 [color=ed1c24]more babies[/color] [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】[/color] Late teens [color=9e0b0f] 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 [/color]Straight [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Nation[/U]】[/color] The Empire of Stone [color=ed1c24]good choice[/color] [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Birthplace[/U]】[/color] Iwa [color=9e0b0f] 【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】[/color] The Empire of Stone [color=9e0b0f] 【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】[/color] None that she is aware of. [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Rank[/U]】[/color] Toku[color=ed1c24]sentai[/color] Jonin [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】[/color] -Futon -Doton [color=9e0b0f] 【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】[/color] Consistently dressed in black [color=ed1c24]got that out of the way[/color] - the young maiden will typically be seen in a black kimono with white and very light brown tones to accompany the dreary look. She keeps the bottom part of her Kimono looser than usual as to aid in her mobility when it comes to fighting. Now to accompany the midnight kimono, is her long and straight coal colored hair. Her eyes seems to mimic this trend, resulting in a deep grey. As if it were to get any more depressing, her porcelain skin only contrasts all of these black and grey tones. Leaving the girl to almost appear as a sickly being, but its quiet the opposite as she is regularly found somewhere not caged in with 4 walls. Even on her days off, the Kunoichi is found wearing deeper, and darker tones of any and every color. Burgundy [color=ed1c24]wut[/color] seeming to be her second favorite color to place on her body. She usually keeps a small fannypack-esque bag attatched around her waist, and resting on her back - as to store basic ninja tools, and a small comb. Traditional Japanese sandals will always be found on her rather small feet. Miyako stands at a staggering height of 5'5", and weighing in at a hefty 120 pounds. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Personality[/U]】[/color] [color=ed1c24]savato's crap style remixed a la tattoos[/color] [i]In life....[/i] Miyako seems to wear a constant unenthusiastic look, her blank stare can be taken for someone trying to constantly understand the world around her. But in reality, she finds herself to be bored by everything around her. Friendships are far and few in between for the girl, she isn't opposed to spending time with someone, but Miyako prefers her time to be spent alone. She is never one to go out of her way to be hostile, until negative energy is presented to her from another being. She seems to follow the [i]'do unto others as you would have them do unto you'[/i], way of life. Miyako is very tight lipped with her relationships, and acquaintances, seeming to always have few words for any conversation. Outside of missions, or battles - she doesn't trust very easily. Obviously more at ease with those she has worked alongside and views them at some kind of worth in her life. [color=ed1c24]she's goth basically[/color] [i]In war.... [/i]Coming down to a mission, she seems to carry the same type of stern attitude into the battle field as she has at home. Though it is noticeable she becomes more headstrong when it comes to being in a squad, and is more talkative. As she believes that team work is very important, and believes trust and communication is a key factor in carrying a mission out successfully. She has been known to butt heads with her insistent opinions on how to effectively carry out a mission. Though, if she truly trusts the squad leader - she is more submissive and will give little input. Miyako believes no one should be left behind, and will do her best to ensure her comrades see a mission through to the end. [i]In love....[/i] Miyako has no interest in any kind of romantic relations with anyone for the time being. Growing up with a single mother [color=ed1c24]that explains everything[/color], whom she never saw receive love from another. The idea of it had never been implanted, and to her - she can bear a fruitful life alone just as her mother has. Of course, meandering through life she has seen the joy others seem to have of being in 'love', and enjoying the time and company of another. Miyako believes that there could possibly be someone out there to help her explore this avenue, and understand it more - but for now, she is not actively looking or concerned for that matter. [color=ed1c24]blue balls for the shinobi world[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f]【[U]History[/U]】[/color] Born on the outskirts of Iwa in the still of a late winter night, Miyako made her debut appearance into the world. The girl would live her whole life without ever knowing even the name of her father [color=ed1c24]he went to the store[/color]. Let alone what he looked like. She could only pick apart pieces of what he may look like, comparing herself against her mother - but her mothers genes seemed to of dominated her exterior; so it was rather hard to ever come up with an idea of what he may look like. Aside from this small piece of, what some could consider, a minor inconvenience in ones life, Miyako grew up a rather normal life inside of Iwa. Her mother worked hard to support the two, they lived barely scraping by all the time. Miyako would constantly be left home alone [color=ed1c24]no daddeh figure? should be shunned by the empire![/color], whilst her mother was out trying to make ends meat for the two of them. It wouldn't be till Miyako was only a few years older around the age of 10 that she would begin to realize the rigorous work schedule of her mother - and decide to find a way to work as soon as possible. Being left to her own devices at home regularly, she picked up reading, and practicing Taijutsu as a way to keep herself busy in the passing hours waiting for her mothers return. She became very self sufficient as a child, learning to cook, mend broken items, and more at a young age. She wouldn't begin to start leaving the house during the day till she was a bit older, around 10/11, then she would begin to quietly sit on the side lines and watch the world's passerby's. Trying to understand proper communication to make friends, and not live her life as a complete shut in. Reading about all this in books only made her want to venture more, but as she was placed into the academy, and had minor altercations with other girls. Miyako decided her life was best lived in solitude, away from friendships - only acquaintances. Only truly enjoying the company of her mother. Within the Academy, it was shown her Chakra Nature was Futon - but during her years there she also seemed to have a small affinity for Doton. Though she did not focus on it, and a large portion of the time only relies on Futon as her Chakra Nature. She excelled in class, and all of the written work, and tests - as well as slightly sticking out as an above average Kunoichi with a promising future. How easily she floated by in the Academy was noticed by her classmates, and with her silent personality - many assumed she thought of herself greater than the others. When really she just enjoyed keeping her mouth shut, and learning what she could from the teacher, and future Sensei. It was also discovered in the Academy, that the real reason Miyako was able to maintain a perfect score in her written work, was that she had a photographic memory [color=ed1c24]enf here's the snowflake factor[/color]. Only having to look at something once, even if for a few moments - and she could recall it again perfectly merely minutes, hours, and days later. She seemed to have the memory of an elephant, and could easily recite someone's past comments back to them verbatim. With this semi-incredible gift, as soon as she graduated the Academy, and passed her Chunin and Jonin exams, she was labeled as a Tokubetsu Jonin. Usually sent on missions that required the teams to pay great attention to detail, and because she could easily retrieve anything from her memory, she was seen as a viable and useful figure. A "Walking Library", as some would refer to her as. [color=ed1c24]sounds more like a form of asperger's than just super memory. usually those with such memory cant recite literally everything like that. would explain her behaviors though.[/color] It was also at the start of the academy, that Miyako would practice and perfect the art of Traditional Fan Dancing [color=ed1c24]the evolution of fan girling[/color]. Performing for the wealthier in the community, and earning a living off of that. Her earnings did not go to her, but her mother - as to help ease her out of the strenuous hours of work she had been living with for years. With the practice and perfection of these dances, and techniques and the discovery of her Futon Chakra Nature - Miyako realized she could combine the two and excel on the battlefield with the use of her fans, and fluid movements. As Miyako made a name for herself in the Empire of Stone, she soon joined the Military, and was immediately placed into the Intelligence Division. Though she proved worthy on the battlefield. It was her mind, and memory they really sought after. Miyako was seen as someone who would be able to gather, and retain new data for the up and coming mission that would soon hit the nations as they joined forces. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Special Traits[/U]】[/color] Highly proficient in Ninjutsu Has a photographic memory Avid/Skilled Japanese Fan Dancer Novice Chakra Control [b]Heavily[/b] Superstitious [color=ed1c24]praise jashin[/color] Novice Taijutsu Adept Kenjutsu [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】[/color] - -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】[/color] [i] [color=9e0b0f][u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] [/color] Duo Fans [color=9e0b0f][u]Description:[/u][/color] Two small hand fans she carries on her at all times, typically tucked away in her kimono sleeves. She uses this in accordance with her Chakra Nature. [color=9e0b0f][u]Appearance:[/u][/color] The fans are two solid colors on each side - white and black. [color=9e0b0f][u]Name of Weapon or Item:[/u] [/color] "Yorukaze" [color=9e0b0f][u]Description:[/u][/color] A Kissaki tipped, higher quality katana she obtained in the academy from a superior after they saw her affinity for wielding a blade. [color=9e0b0f][u]Appearance:[/u][/color] Sheathed in black, with red string tied around the handle. ~A small burgundy comb ~Mini scrolls ~Basic Ninja stuff ~Omamori for good health [/I] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f]【[U]Kekkei Genkai [/U]】[/color] N/A ------------------------------------------------------- [color=9e0b0f] [I]Jutsu:[/I][/color] [hider=Canon Jutsu] Futon; [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Drilling_Sky_Dancing_Fan]Drilling Sky, Dancing Fan[/URL] [color=ed1c24]no game jutsu[/color] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Bashōsen:_Coil_of_Wind]Coil of Wind[/URL] [color=ed1c24]usually i'd say no since its bound to a special artifact, but it's literally just a gust of wind so w/e[/color] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dust_Wind_Technique]Dust Wind Technique[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fan_Wind_Roaring_Wall]Fan Wind Roaring Wall[/URL] [color=ed1c24]game[/color] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Vacuum_Sword]Vacuum Sword[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Whirlwind_Drop]Whirlwind Drop[/URL] [color=ed1c24]game[/color] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Whirlwind_Pinching_Wall]Whirlwind Pinching Wall[/URL] [color=ed1c24]game[/color] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Divine_Wind]Wind Release: Divine Wind[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Cast_Net]Wind Release: Cast Net[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Air_Current_Wild_Dance]Wind Release: Air Current Wild Dance[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Sword_of_the_Wind_Count]Wind Release: Sword of the Wind Count[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Rotating_Shuriken]Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken[/URL] Doton; [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth-Style_Wall]Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Sand_Dance]Earth Release: Sand Dance[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Collapse]Earth Release: Rock Collapse[/URL] [URL=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Trail]Earth Release: Rock Trail[/URL] [color=ed1c24]protip: most of these game wind moves can be mimicked with a small wind release arsenal. unnecessary[/color] [/hider] [hider=Custom Jutsu] [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Barrage of Stone [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] C [b]Range:[/b] Wide/Long [b]Nature Type:[/b] Futon & Doton [b]Description:[/b] With the use of Doton, stamping her foot she will force small bullet shaped pebbles/stones to rise from the earth. With futon, she waves boths fans creating a wide spray of stone bullets at opponents. Great for deflecting, and hindering opponents advancements. [b]Name of Technique:[/b] Dueling Cyclones [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] Ninjutsu [b]Rank:[/b] B [b]Range:[/b] Wide/Long/Short [b]Nature Type:[/b] Futon [b]Description:[/b] With the use of both of her fans, she can construct two cyclones and with great chakra control, command both with each fan. This is also very straining as of how much she has to concentration, but this is also depending on the given situation.[/hider] [color=ed1c24]fix these 'canon' jutsu and its fine. approved goth lass with daddy issues.[/color][/hider] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [/center] [hr] [color=ed1c24]the dickish gm savato is about to bully you. be prepared!!!! escaping it still possible!!![/color] [hider=Iyokan Koko] [center][img]http://txt-dynamic.cdn.1001fonts.net/txt/dHRmLjcyLkVCOTY3NS5TWGx2YTJGdUlFdHZhMjgsLjAAAAAA/painting-with-chocolate.regular.png[/img] [URL=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRD7WylAfkw]The Final Blow[/URL] [color=ed1c24]good themes today, my lucky day. this is is my favorite.[/color] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [img]https://i.imgur.com/NKtqI0I.png[/img] [color=39b54a]>asian ginger[/color] --------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Full Name[/U]】[/color] [indent]Iyokan Koko [color=ed1c24]chanel[/color][/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Nickname/Alias[/U]】[/color] [indent]Orenji Abazure [sup][color=gray][loose meaning: orange bitch][/color][/sup][/indent][/indent] [color=ed1c24]isnt there an actual term for the color 'orange' in japanse other than ORANGEE[/color] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Gender[/U]】[/color] [indent]Female[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Age[/U]】[/color] [indent]Nineteen[/indent][/indent] [color=ed1c24]big babbeh[/color] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Age Appearance[/U]】[/color] [indent]Late teens[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Sexuality[/U]】[/color] [indent]Heterosexual[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Nation[/U]】[/color] [indent]Isles of Mist[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Birthplace[/U]】[/color] [indent]Small fishing village near Kirigakure[/indent][/indent] [color=ed1c24]yes poor people pls[/color] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Alignment/Affiliation/Organization[/U]】[/color] [indent]Kirigakure[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Clan/Bloodline[/U]】[/color] [indent]Civilian Origins[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Rank[/U]】[/color] [indent]Toku[color=ed1c24]sentai[/color] Jōnin [sup][color=gray][poison specialist][/color][/sup][/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Chakra Nature[/U]】[/color] [indent][img] https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/7/7a/Nature_Icon_Wind.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012163149[/img] Fūton [sup][color=gray][primary][/color][/sup] [img]https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/naruto/images/a/ab/Nature_Icon_Water.svg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/18?cb=20091012165923[/img] Suiton [sup][color=gray][secondary][/color][/sup][/indent][/indent] [color=ed1c24]this is dion-tier of trying too hard with appearances. you have NO idea how asinine it is for my review style. i cant WAIT for the tables[/color] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Appearance/Wardrobe[/U]】[/color] [indent]Koko is a woman with a wiry frame, her limbs seeming almost too long for her torso [color=ed1c24]yummy legs[/color]. Because of her wiry frame, she tends to slink around instead of walking and has an agile casual way of moving that appears languid and borderline graceless [color=ed1c24]this is giving me hilarious mental images for some reason[/color]. Her unruly red hair has been chopped short with bangs hanging across her forehead, as she tends to hold functionality over beautifully long lustrous hair. Her sharpish eyes are a light green and tend to narrow in thought often; under her eyes, her nose is straight and almost beaklike in the way it sticks out further than the rest of her features. Koko’s mouth is often curled into a smirk or smile, and her resting face seems peaceful and happy rather than bitchy. For clothes, Koko tends to favor orange[color=ed1c24]e[/color] and [s]black[/s] [color=ed1c24]KURO DESU NE[/color]. Her typical shinobi outfit is a black halter top that curves around her neck and shows the lithe muscles of her shoulders and back. The halter top is tucked into her orange pants which are loose around her hips, but not loose enough to fall off, to give her range of movement without uncomfortably stretchy thin pants. Her orange pants have triangular holes in the sides which show the bandages wrapped around her upper thighs, bandaged in a way to almost look like fish scales. Her wrists are wrapped in black bandages and her feet encased in open-heel orange sandals. When leisurely walking or traveling, Koko likes to wear her straw hat over her unmanageable hair, but it quick to set it on the ground during a serious fight lest it get in the way. Even though Koko is not the type to dwell on aesthetics, she likes to keep her fingernails and toenails painted black because she finds the activity relaxing. [color=ed1c24]and now she's back to generic girl status[/color] [/indent][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Personality[/U]】[/color] [indent]Iyokan Koko is a laidback woman of leisure. She’s neither known for an explosive temper nor a thin patience. Instead, she adopts an affable stance towards everyone and anything, expressing false empathy with most she meets with. Unlike those unfortunate child prodigies, Koko is not socially inept or awkward and can read situations rather easily and respond appropriately. Her niceties are mostly false as Koko finds it rather hard to grow attached to other people. She’s not particularly misanthropic – she finds people very fascinating, really, and would have specialized in interrogation if she had any skill whatsoever for psychology – but she tends to have a pragmatic, big picture outlook on life that leads to her seeing people as mere names on a page than living breathing things. This isn’t to say that she is entirely sociopathic and incapable of growing bonds and roots [color=ed1c24]we could use a sociopath actually, keep her nasty. but they also tend to stagnate in progress so this may be a better call[/color]. The few that Koko becomes close to, usually through long periods of socialization, she can become quite possessive over and doesn’t like to share her objects of affections with anyone else. Beyond her laidback nature, Koko has gained a reputation for being a sadist. Koko herself doesn’t see herself as a sadist, but instead acknowledges the fact that her sadist reputation probably stems from the fact that she likes to play. Koko enjoys the small things of a fight – likes to see the burning fire in her foes, the way they pick themselves up after everything she throws at them, and generally likes to poke and prod the bear to see how it reacts. Because of that, Koko tends to string enemies along rather than outright end it out of a fascination to see how they would react to whatever she throws at them. [color=ed1c24]delicious[/color] Nothing really seems to bother Koko, and if it does, it’s hidden behind a false smile or smirk. Insults and digging into wounds tend to roll over her like water off a duck’s back. She doesn’t rise to bait and, even in fights, tends to shower others with compliments and attempts to get to know the other. For her, it isn’t rare for her to suddenly ask her opponent what they’re favorite color is in the middle of a fight. If there is a hair trigger to get a rise out of her, no one has found it yet – she doesn’t even get angry when people insult those she finds herself particularly close to. [color=ed1c24]this is an exciting challenge actually[/color] [/indent][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]History[/U]】[/color] [indent]Iyokan Koko was born to a poor fishing family in a poor fishing village outside of Kirigakure. They definitely were not the poorest of the bunch in that small village, but they weren’t having any five-course meals anytime soon. Koko was the youngest daughter of four, but she wasn’t particularly doted on nor was she treated unfairly. If anything, Koko’s beginnings to life could be described as average for the lower class of the Isles of the Mist. When Koko was five years old, her father died of a sickness due to the fact that they were too poor for the medicine he needed [color=ed1c24]this rp is a reverse disney with absent/dead dads instead of mums[/color]. After his death, unable to support her children, her mother thought it was best for her children if she gave them up to an orphanage in Kirigakure [color=ed1c24]best mum[/color]. Hopefully, her mother thought, they would get what they needed there. Some of Koko’s sisters faced years of bitterness from the seeming abandonment, but Koko didn’t really focus on her family life. Instead, Koko focused on her dream of becoming a fabulous shinobi of Kirigakure. Three of her older sisters instead went to work in various civilian jobs, but the second youngest of the five decided to join Koko in becoming a shinobi as she dreamed that the money she earned could bring her family back together. [color=ed1c24]fits pragmatism. she's still a cunt though[/color] In the academy, Koko struggled finding her niche in the shinobi world while her older sister, Koto, excelled in ninjutsu. At first Koko was angry, but after an explosive argument with Koto, Koko decided it was time to cut the bullshit and focus on herself [color=ed1c24]more smart moves. i cant bully you as hard as the other victims here, darn[/color]. After that, Koko slowly drifted away from her sisters until they were more acquaintances than family. With a newfound energy to focus, Koko realizes that ninjutsu would never be her strong point – her chakra reserves were too low – so she instead focused on taijutsu and building up her endurance. With taijutsu, however, there ran the risk of meeting enemies that could defeat her without letting her get close. Due to this worry, Koko dabbled in iryo-ninjutsu and medical knowledge until she learned enough about the human body to start utilizing poisons with her taijutsu. Though she knows the mystical palm technique, outside of using it for designing new poisons, Koko can’t use it for much else. After graduating from the academy, Koko worked her ass off to rise through the ranks. She picked up some ninjutsu jutsu to use in emergencies, but for the most part using jutsu was too taxing on her chakra reserves unless they were lower than C-rank. While a chuunin, Koko picked up the habit of smoking and began training with a kenka kiseru, a fighting pipe. Koko became a Tokubetsu Jōnin when she was sixteen after she gained the moniker Orenji [color=ed1c24]dat japanese[/color] Abazure on the field due to her poison usage and bad habit of playing with her enemies. The last Koko heard of her sisters, they were all living together in some nice apartment in Kirigakure while looking for their long lost mother. Koto is currently a chuunin, having turned down the chance of becoming a tokubetsu jonin as she wanted to become a full jonin rather than be pidgeon-holed as a specialist [color=ed1c24]it says up there she's still a tokusentai. not that it matters.[/color] [/indent][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Special Traits[/U]】[/color] [indent][color=#75CAEB]≈[/color] Poison resistance [color=#75CAEB]≈[/color] Good chakra control [color=#75CAEB]≈[/color] Taijutsu user [color=#75CAEB]≈[/color] High endurance[/indent][/indent] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Afflictions/Nerfs[/U]】[/color] [indent][color=#75CAEB]≈[/color] Small chakra reserves[/indent][/indent] [color=ed1c24]save this for IC gained nerfs and afflictions[/color] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Equipment/Weapons/Items[/U]】[/color] [color=ed1c24]jesus fuck this is worse than i anticipated. omg kill me[/color] [indent][table=bordered] [row][cell][center] Name [/center][/cell][cell][center] Description [/center][/cell][cell][center] Appearance [/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center][color=75CAEB][i]Kenka Kiseru[/i][/color][/center][/cell][cell]A 45.5 centimeters long smoking pipe that can be used for both smoking purposes and battle. In fights, Koko might switch the tobacco in it to poison in order to puff potent poison smoke into the air around her that slows down enemies' reflexes. In taijutsu, Koko uses the pipe much like a staff would be used.[/cell][cell][center][url=http://www.kiseru-pipe.com/293-2712-thickbox/ancient-kenka-kiseru-unused-engraved-falcon-212mm.jpg][color=75CAEB][i]Appearance Link[/i][/color][/url][/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center][color=75CAEB][i]Basic Shinobi Tools[/i][/color][/center][/cell][cell]Senbon, kunai, shuriken, ninja wire, paper bombs, and storage scrolls. She has several sets of projectiles and ninja wire, each with a different poison and then a set that is not poisoned. She has a storage scroll for each set, with the paper bombs being held with the normal set.[/cell][cell][center][url=https://pre00.deviantart.net/5647/th/pre/i/2013/257/b/5/ninja_tools_by_kohaku626-d6macjw.png][color=75CAEB][i]Appearance Link[/i][/color][/url][/center][/cell][/row][/table][table=bordered][row][cell][center] Poison Name [/center][/cell][cell][center] Uses and Effects [/center][/cell][cell][center] Appearance [/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center][color=75CAEB][i]Jōryū ni Suiei[/i][/color][/center][/cell][cell]The poison is used to slow down the reflexes of an opponent. Koko usually introduces it early on in a fight as it only slowly gets introduced into their system and can take a while to take affect. The poison only works if it is inhaled or injected into the bloodstream. Taking advantage of an opponent's sluggish movements, Koko then tries to overpower her enemy through taijutsu.[/cell][cell]Jōryū ni Suiei looks like aqua-blue tobacco in its nonlethal form. When inserted into Koko's pipe, the fire causes it to glow before emitting the poisonous smoke that affects her victims. [color=ed1c24]this poison is alright. i trust it wont be exaggerated[/color][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center][color=75CAEB][i]Akai Kurēn Saikuron[/i][/color][/center][/cell][cell]This poison is a hallucinogenic and often causes Koko's opponents to see vivid colors and mirages. Sometimes the opponent can see terrifying hallucinations, sometimes they're more innocent and warm. Because she cannot depend on what the hallucinogenic causes her opponent to see, Koko uses it to distract her opponent while she attacks from another angle. The hallucinogenic is fast acting and begins working within two minutes; however, it can wear off from anywhere to fifteen minutes to an hour, depending on the constitution of the opponent. Koko usually uses this poison by coating it on her weapons as it only works when it enters the bloodstream. [color=ed1c24]cute genjutsu replacement, though it seems a bit vague to be all that effective imo. discuss with your opponents how this would go down.[/color][/cell][cell]Akai Kurēn Saikuron is a red liquid, with the consistency of milk almost, that is strained from a poisonous orange and red flower.[/cell][/row] [row][cell][center][color=75CAEB][i]Doku Mikan no Seppun[/i][/color][/center][/cell][cell]Koko's most deadly poison [color=ed1c24]there's always THAT poison.[/color]. Doku Mikan no Seppun is able to paralyze opponents in small doses and kill in higher doses. However, the line between kill and paralyzing is very thin as the dosage all matters on constitution, weight, height, and poison resistance which cannot be calculated easily in a fight. As such, it is very easy to overdose an opponent when meaning to paralyze and paralyze when meaning to kill. Due to the high margin of error, Koko mostly uses this poison for assassinations rather than in battle unless as a last resort. On the same vein, it is incredibly difficult to use as it does not stick on a kunai or senbon in enough concentration to paralyze someone. It would only work if multiple kunai or senbon have cut into the skin. [color=ed1c24]i'm not a fan of super paralysis poisons or immediate death ones either. i would argue that a direct hit would be needed from a kunai for it to paralyze, while death poisons are generally just 100% useless as full paralysis ensures wins in most cases. have it be a progressive numbing effect.[/color][/cell][cell]Doku Mikan no Seppun is a clear and odorless liquid. It has the slight tangy taste of a tangerine; therefore, it can be detected by taste. Usually, if you are tasting it, it is too late - ingestion is the best way for the poison to take. It is very liquidy and doesn't stick to projectiles well - it is best used hidden in food.[/cell][/row][/table][/indent][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=ed1c24]poison mist has the effects of the first and second poisons I suppose, yes? good.[/color] [indent][color=EB9675]【[U]Jutsu[/U]】[/color][indent][table=bordered][row][cell][center] S-Rank [/center][/cell][cell][center] A-Rank [/center][/cell][cell][center] B-Rank [/center][/cell][cell][center] C-Rank [/center][/cell][cell][center] D-Rank [/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Rotating_Shuriken][color=75CAEB][i]Fūton: Kaiten Shuriken[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Poison_Mist][color=75CAEB][i]Dokuton: Dokugiri[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [color=75CAEB]Dokuton: Doku Senbon no jutsu*[/color] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Transformation_Technique][color=75CAEB][i]Henge no Jutsu[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Swift_Wind_Wall][color=75CAEB][i]Fūton: Fūjinheki[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Sphere][color=75CAEB][i]Fūton: Shinkūgyoku[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Gale_Palm][color=75CAEB][i]Fūton: Reppūshō[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Clone_Technique][color=75CAEB][i]Bunshin no Jutsu[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Mystical_Palm_Technique][color=75CAEB][i]Shōsen Jutsu[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Violent_Whirlwind][color=75CAEB][i]Fūton: Ressenpū[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Great_Breakthrough][color=75CAEB][i]Fūton: Daitoppa[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Substitution_Jutsu][color=75CAEB][i]Kawarimi no Jutsu[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][/row] [row][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [/center][/cell][cell][center] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rope_Escape_Technique][color=75CAEB][i]Nawanuke no Jutsu[/i][/color][/url] [/center][/cell][/row] [/table][/indent][/indent] [indent][indent][hider=Custom Jutsu*] [indent][b]Name of Technique:[/b] [indent]Dokuton: Doku Senbon no jutsu[/indent] [b]Type of Jutsu:[/b] [indent]Offensive[/indent] [b]Rank:[/b] [indent]C-Rank[/indent] [b]Range:[/b] [indent]Mid- to Long-range[/indent] [b]Nature Type:[/b] [indent]Poison[/indent] [color=ed1c24]isn't actually an element but its fine to have it be a sort of category[/color] [b]Description:[/b] [indent]The user molds the chakra in their stomach to become poisonous then uses the chakra to form thin needles. The user then expels the projectiles from their mouth at their enemies. [color=ed1c24]once again i assume its one of the poisons cited, notably the first and second?[/color][/indent][/indent][/hider][/indent][/indent] [center]--------------------------------------------------------------------------------[/center] [color=ed1c24]For a Poison Character she's actually well balanced. Keep in mind the restrictions I put on the last poison and be reasonable. I'm generally very strict with three things in Naruto: Genjutsu (because most are generic and bad), Seals (way too opened ended) and Poisons as they've been waaaayyyy too strong in the canon and just make fights hella boring without one side looking powergamey. Approved, post the sheet.[/color] [/hider]