[@CavnderOHeart]

Refer to my response to Nightmare's sheet when it comes to needing to put more effort into the descriptions. But additionally to that:
- Several grammar errors, and while I'm not an English Major- there's a surplus of spelling and sentence structure errors that are unacceptable. I don't mean to be crass, but this is outright unacceptable, sorry friend, but unless you refine the living hell out of that thing I cannot grace that thing with any sort of approval.