[quote=@DeadDrop]
let me know if my post length is acceptable if not i can put more :zzz
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Whenever you post, go back to your character sheet and see if the situation somehow affect your dark secret, disadvantages, advantages, or attributes. If something does, delve into describing that. For example, the 'passion' indicator. What made her react to it? What did she feel before talking? Some kind of thought preceded the question 'what is it? Conduct some internal dialog with your character, so that the rest of can get to know her better.

[@Ashgan][@DeadDrop]

I've made 'offocial' versions of your character's portrait that you can sue [u]if you want[/u]. Both of them have that worn out, distressed look.

[img]https://i.imgur.com/Ekz1DAs.png[/img]
[img]https://i.imgur.com/N4PYQqj.png[/img]