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[@Grape] Not bad. Something like wind would probably require a catalyst. (Most magic now a days does in Fate. The ones usually exempt from the catalyst rule tend to be Casters, but they're from a long period ago where magic was more powerful.) I want to see what you come up with for a history and personality.
As for your Servant, I recommend fluffing the backstory a bit. Like of the particular stories about this particular Valkyrie. Lancer's tend to have Magic Resistance (Usually the higher the rank the more they resist.) and as a Valkyrie she'd probably have divinity as a skill. (Which just means she's divine and certain people might be weaker to that.) Also consider your Noble Phantasm a bit. (Some servants have more than one, so you can mess around a bit with ideas. I recommend using Name: /Rank: /Type: /Description: to help you flesh it out more. (Type is usually anti-person/anti-army/Bounded Field, etc. (Bounded Fields are usually some kind of area buff or territory that the servant is stronger in. Anti-person is single target, and Anti-Army is your super move that could wipe out an army.) Also, as a Valykrie consider a skill based around judging others, like seeing lies. 

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Thank you so much for clearing up some stuff! I have seen a bit here and there of the show so I have a general, baseline idea of the concept so the help is truly appreciated.

For Loralie I will give her some sort of catalyst to use her magecraft. Also, finish up her personality and bio.

For Hildr I'll adjust accordingly! :D I will flesh out more of a backstory though most of it will be made up, as what I have written down was all that was available on the wiki haha. I will try my best to keep it all in the vein of what is already established with Hildr.