Dar'Jzo looks pretty darn good from where I'm standing. He has a really believable story that's drenched in Khajiiti culture and I certainly appreciate the strong family approach you took with this character; it's easy to believe that his loved ones were the prime motivators in his life, and it's always interesting to see characters that struggle with immoral lifestyles and trying to do right by their family. I didn't see anything else I thought needed addressing, overall, looks great to me!