[@Spoopy Scary], Dar'Jzo was an enjoyable read; you've put in a lot of effort for sure. With that said, my co-GMs and I still have a few issues.

1. Going from the local recruiter to the Mane is quite a jump. Your character could have contacted the regional military commander in between.

2. I appreciate the volume of content, however, the bio ended at "Winterhold was supposedly destroyed last month". I need to know how Dar'Jzo got from that ship to our group in Solitude.

3. Nashav, really? Better name pls.