Thanks for the feedback! I have a busy day ahead of me so I may not be able to make the changes right away. You're right that recruiter to Mane is a large jump, and I should have been more thoughtful of that.

I thought the boat trip was just suggested to be uneventful, and I didn't want to bog it down with too much fat so I left it to the reader's inference. I guess I'll try to explain it better?

There are people named Bob and John out there in the world, man, throw me a bone 😭 Okay, okay, I'll work something out.