[@ADamnFiddle]
So, a good character. (Please use some of the coding to make the bio look more pretty.) Some of this stuff looks fine, but it might be a case of more dangerous in practice than on paper. But accepted for now. (If I missed something that's blatant bs, let me know.)

[@Seirei No Hai]
Protection from Mortal Wounds (Rank A) is getting a flat no. In a movie, game, or book where story events can lead stuff to perfectly end something like this, in a RP it just seems to be an excuse to justify powerplaying. "Of course I can dodge all 1000 projectiles or defend myself from a bomb in a split second. I have Protection from Mortal Wounds that means I can." I don't think you intend it to come off that way, but combined with your spear that will pierce any defense, it's kind of a case of "My defense is perfect and my attacks are unblockable." 
The rest of his stuff is pretty much okay in comparison.