[quote=@Mike the Bloodwolf]
What more do you need?
[/quote]

Read the profiles for [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/170471-royal-rumble/char]this RP[/url]. I want something as properly-formatted as they are, and a biography that is coherent and well-written (two paragraphs of five lines each at the minimum, and they [i]must make sense[/i]).

Right now, your profile is slapdash and hastily/badly written and makes no sense. Sorry for being blunt.