Not the GM, but I thought to point out the issues I see with the sheet.

[h1]Ken  Ikenaga/池永永[/h1]
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[color=00aeef]Name:[/color]Ken Iwayanagi [color=red]Is his name Ikenaga or Iwayanagi?[/color]
[color=00aeef]Age:[/color]17(01,01) [color=red]I assume you mean January 1st as in 1/1.[/color]
[color=00aeef]Height/Weight:[/color]190.cm/122.47kg (6'3/270] [color=red]I still think his height and weight don't really add up for someone Japanese, but I'll go with what Hachi says. You also have a bracket and a parenthesis together instead of () or [].[/color]
[color=00aeef]Blood Type:[/color]AB-negative
[color=00aeef]Hair Color:[/color] Blackish silver grey [color=red]What color is it? Black, silver or gray? Silver and gray are just lighter shades of black.[/color]
[color=00aeef]Eye Color:[/color] Brown
[color=00aeef]Seiyuu/VA:[/color] Hiroshi Kamiya
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[color=00aeef]Physique:[/color] Extremly [color=red]Extremely*[/color] tall with an extremly muscalar [color=red]extremely muscular*[/color] build, Ken looks very intimidating but handsome at the same time. Ken has [color=red]comma or em dash goes here[/color] according to him [color=red]another comma or em dash[/color] atleast [color=red]add space between at and least, probably could drop the word altogether[/color] the perfect build not being to lean when he could get easily underestimated but not being bulky enough that he has to walk side ways through doors. [color=red]the ending of this sentence is weird, could probably sum it up as he is at his apex or pinnacle, something around those lines[/color]He yhas [color=red]has*[/color] short cut silverish blackish grey [color=red]could drop the word cut, and probably should just choose a color and stick to it for hair color[/color]hair and vibrant, beautiful brown eyes with small freckles on the sides of his face.


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[color=00aeef]School:[/color] Ken wears his uniform in an extremely respectful manner [color=red]Could probably break this into two sentences, or with structure wording like such as, which would likely need some rephrasing if you go the latter route[/color]his shirt is often buttoned up and his jacket looks boring. He also wears glasses, extremely nerdy glasses, scratch that extremely nerdy reading glasses.[color=red]I get what you're trying to go for but this is honestly redundant when it comes to describing by stating it over and over with only a minor detail being added each time[/color] The only form of self-expression is his blue smartwatch which he affectionally [color=red]affectionately*[/color] calls Ari. 

[color=00aeef]Casual:[/color] Ken ditches the glasses out of school cause [color=red]because*[/color] he doesn't need them but he keeps them in his back pockets for safe keeping. He usually wears tennis shoes or sneakers, with either a variety of heavy apparel or t-shirts with khakis.

[color=00aeef]Personality:[/color]ESTJ: Ken is very practical coming from a family of athletes and high-level politicians [color=red]Could probably put a period between practical and coming[/color] he tends to do things that are consistent and reliable with the ability to get things done. That doesn't mean that he hates the theoretical he just won't use it unless it has a real-life application or he his hand has been forced. He likes to go with the flow to see things out and then execute.

[color=00aeef]Likes:[/color]Boxing, athletics, baking, cooking, winning, writing, reading, math, science, getting something done, people in general.

[color=00aeef]Dislikes:[/color] Rude people, Idealsts, laziness
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[color=00aeef]Property:[/color]
Blue bycilcle [color=red]bicycle*[/color]
[color=00aeef]Several peices of althetic equipment[/color] [color=red]pieces* athletic*[/color]
[color=00aeef]Job:[/color]Part-time sports commentator(his pay depends on the size of the event)
[color=00aeef]Theme Song:[/color] Insanity
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6PHpCywCcIA
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