[@Katakon] You may need to tweak the backstory a bit. Viper and her pupils would have left in secret. Raine would also have needed to be one of Viper's students to have been given the option to go. Cormack and his students wouldn't have learned of this until a day later. I'd like you to be more specific about the parent's death. Frankly, dying of "darkness" makes no sense whatsoever. If they were consumed then they would have turned into Heartless. Darkness isn't some disease you can contract. You either open your Heart to it and possibly turn into a Heartless... or you don't and are able to resist it. I also need to know where this Darkness came from. Darkness has no sway in the Land of Departure due to the Keyblade Order. If he's from another world that became lost and he awoke in the Land of Departure, then fair enough. I just need the clarification.

[@vancexentan] I'm not seeing any glaring issues, so he looks good to go. I just need you to clarify for me which Master he trained under. Viper or Cormack? I'm assuming Viper based on everything else, but confirm it for me anyway just to be safe.