[@Guy0fV4lor][@Kazemitsu]
Aside from adding a bit more detail or fleshing things out here and there, both of these are fine so far. There's just one suggestion I'd make, though it's not unique to the two of you.

[color=red][b]Just remember, everyone, I'd prefer the Past Lives not be a bunch of Modern Renaissance Men/Women. Having hobbies is one thing but no normal human being could be a genius chemist AND a pro athlete AND a skilled mechanic AND an expert fencer or marksman all at once.[/b][/color]