[@ReusableSword]
Feel free to jump in!

[@UltraCraftGames]
Looks good! I find his past life from the perspective of someone in a third world country (at least that’s what it sounded like) to be really interesting! I hope some of those cultural differences will come across through his personality and his perspective on the differences—and similarities—of this new world. 

[@Guy0fV4lor]
I like the additional flavor to his personality and history, but remember the characters are coming from our modern day world. Maybe somewhere less developed than the first world, but still our Earth. Having him be a former Knight or Lord kind of clashes with that. Maybe replace that with something like...a police officer who becomes chief/Sheriff/constable, but then the judge/district attorney/mayor won’t let him do things the way he wants to?

[@Rune_Alchemist]
Looks good, thanks!