[@YungTweak] Well the cap is [i]eleven[/i] and we're nowhere close to that presently. I have one CS in, so only one slot is genuinely taken at this stage. Welcome aboard!

[@Macro] Oh my goodness I think I'm in love. I see she has a shred of an aetheric capability herself, a rare gem she is indeed. Giselle is absolutely fantastic and I give you my full endorsements on that. I may be a little bit biased because as I started reading she bears some similarities to my own character Adrianna, and then it diverged and only got better as I read. I'm not sure if her and Adi will be best friends or try to kill each other. I think both are possibilities.

I do have to voice an objection on Grogara however, for a specific timeline reason. Going back through I realize this is mentioned in the Kingdoms and Ages section but not the Races section which I think I'll need to fix for future clarification. Orcs only came about in Avalon two centuries after the original Legion's rampage, so there's no way a Legionnaire could be a half-breed. [i]Other than that[/i], I have no further criticisms.

 

I also want to take this time to talk more generally about character power level now that I have an example. Giselle having an aetheric capability (generally weak and uncommon) makes her on the strong side (and perhaps part of why she was chosen in the first place) but it serves a relevant purpose to her character, which is the most important thing so I dig it. Now [b]Foresight[/b] I actually think I want to see dialed up. The Legionnaire abilities can get a bit more outrageous, since these were "the greatest evil to ever walk Avalon" yada yada. I would totally approve it still if it were perfect perception of the immediate future and all the dodging and evasion capabilities that come with that.

Do not feel a need to stick to the number of weapons/skills/abilities I put in the sheet by default. Nowhere did I say that a finite number are allowed. I will let you know if you've gone overkill, don't worry. Also do not feel a need to stick to the default CS color. That's yours to change as you see fit.