[@Sofaking Fancy], Dael is definitely a sleek and enjoyable read, and as someone who appreciates unorthodox characters, I personally like how he breaks the mold of the usual Orc tropes. However, I have two nitpicks: 

One is that he seems to be an expert at wielding two handed axes, despite the fact that one of his traits that stood out to me in his character sheet is that he isn't that much of a martial character. I would make that skill Adept myself (and also gain an extra Adept skill, if my calculations are correct) for sake of consistency. 

Two is that he wears heavy armor, even when he has a weakness about him having somewhat of a slow pace. That, combined with his pilgrim past, makes me think that he would opt for something lighter, like padded/quilted armor, or leather, or a shirt of mail.

Aside from these I'd say he's pretty crisp. The group could use the morale.