[@Gobby]
Nice find on the pic! Again it's still good, he can go in the tab whenever you're ready.

[quote=The Demon King][color=red]A smile that never faded, even as your body atrophied to nothing? Well aren't you just an [i]inspiration[/i] to all the cripples and invalids out there. Why can't they just suck it up and be happy like you, eh? And in the end you just accepted death, so peaceful--after all, it was your time, right?

Grow a spine. Life isn't something given to you that just fades away. You rip it from the world with everything you have and take it for yourself, and hold on to it until someone else rips it from you. There aren't many Skills that can be gained from life in a hospital bed...but I hope that you, more than some of the others, will have something that counts more than any skill: Drive.[/color][/quote]

[@UltraCraftGames]
Can you give me a little bit more to work with? Try using third-person, descriptive writing, and give us a little more insight into what Peter's doing and thinking?