[@Ferrocerium] I almost missed this being in the other thread. Most of the activity has relocated over to the OOC (there should be a large obvious link on page 2). In terms of feedback I'm a little weary to give final verdicts since it looks like you're still working on it. In any case, I do like it. I think being given nothing, and having everything taken is a great framework for his motivations, though my concern is how focused will he be? If he's too childlike and distracted to really be useful to the party then that's more of a problem since I won't be too keen on them having to constantly be babysitters.