[color=orchid][h2]First post is up! If you've been accepted, you can now actually start RP'ing![/h2][h3]If you haven't been accepted and you haven't posted a character sheet, the due date to post one is on Friday, May 18th.[/h3]
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Updated lists (if you're not on here, I don't know that you exist):
[u]Accepted:[/u]
Mataus - OC - SpecOps
Thecrash20 - EVE - Carrier/Transport
Clocktowerechos - W40K - Freighter/Transport
Sophrus - EVE - Capital Industrial
Burning Kitty* - Star Trek - Advanced Cruiser/Escort
Lmpkio* - Star Wars - Destroyer
DocTachyon* - Halo - Heavy Cruiser
eemmtt* - Star Wars - Capital Ship
Dnafein - Babylon 5 - Fast Attack

*assuming you've effected the changes NanoFreakV2 asked for

[u]Interested[/u] (please post a sheet on May 18th at the latest, if you still want in!):
[@Flamelord]
[@mattmanganon]
[@Helios J Mears]
[@CaptainSully]

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[Flamelord]

Should have gone visari man. Phase missiles FTW
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Vasari were harder to parse as a faction in a manner that I felt comfortable RPing. Besides, considering how Stargate is I figure the Advent will fit right in. 

For the Unity, and all that :D
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I myself am a Vasari girl. I find Advent frigates to be very weak. 
[sub]And I'm also always mysteriously drawn to the dark, evil faction. Planet cracking is fun [i]and[/i] satisfying![/sub][/color]
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[@Retro]
First, hello! Welcome to the guild. Don't worry about any speedbumps from being new; it happens. If you have any questions, feel free to ask, either here in the OOC or via PM! This includes random vocab/acronyms. I also recommend the Formatting Cheatsheet if you want to spend an extra twenty minutes making [color=red]p[/color][color=orange]r[/color][color=yellow]e[/color][color=green]t[/color][color=blue]t[/color][color=indigo]y[/color][color=violet] c[/color][color=hotPink]o[/color][color=deeppink]l[/color][color=mediumvioletred]o[/color][color=darkviolet]r[/color][color=blueviolet]s[/color]! Random piece of newbie advice: try not to join more than three RP's at once. I'm terrible at that sort of thing, myself.

I like how unique your race is! Overall, I like the direction and concept of your sheet. There's just a few edits that would be helpful.

I think you would benefit from a short section on your universe's history; yes, it comes across when you read the character bios, but it would be nice to have it in one place. 

A little more detail  on the communications station would be nice, too. What makes it advanced? Bigger range? More channels? Translation software?

I got a little confused with your backstory for Razor - where did the AI come from? Please do another editing pass. 

Nitpick: I get that the planet destroyer doesn't actually destroy planets, but please name it something else so that other players don't get confused.[hider=Random names I thought of]
(obviously, you don't have to pick one of these)

Annihilaser
Space Kraken
Hull Cracker
Fist of Doom
Project Sunbeam
The Flashlight
The Razor Blade
The Razor Burn
Spray n' Pray Laser
Particle Smasher
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[@Dnafein] Looks great! I like your character pictures. Go ahead and post it in the characters tab.
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