[quote=@Legion02] Uthum is somewhat of an alien looking being. For starters, he’s not all that big for a God. In fact, most humans might actually outsize him. Though do not mistake this for any form of weakness. He’s entirely bald. With greyish skin and big, lidless eyes. He has no mouth, ears nor nose and instead just has smooth skin wherever those features should be. The back of his head but incredibly smooth. His body looks rather atrophied. He has two pairs of arms with 4 fingers on each hand. One thumb and 2 normal fingers. But his index finger is longer than the others and ends in a very sharp claw. While he has legs, he generally just levitates over the ground. [/quote] [i]behold! a Grey![/i] [quote=@Legion02] The release of mana was not supposed to happen so suddenly. Instead, it was supposed to be a trickle. Allowing the mortal races to slowly learn the newly given powers. With the release of mana in one instance, the magical substance was launched everywhere. Giving the mortal races no time to adapt to it. Now Ulthum fears that they might reject his gift. Or worse, than they would not know how to use it! He fears the abuse of mana or the fear various races will have of it. But he is also quite curious. How will the mortal races, made in the image of the gods, react to this strange and magical substance? How creative will they be with it? [/quote] We currently have very few mortal races, and very few mortals in general, so we'll see how this pans out. [quote=@Legion02] Magic is everywhere. [/quote] About this section- first of all, check with [@Lauder] that there's no conflicts of interest between the Energy domain and your portfolio, since they seem pretty similar. Otherwise, much like everything else that's not the bare necessities (hydrogen, gravity, byproducts of hydrogen and gravity), magic exists where it's created by gods, so Uthum will have to create mana in order to bring it into the world (I see you've got that mostly covered in your personality section, though). Other forms of magic will happen as they are figured out in-character. Generally though the sheet seems pretty good. Keep these things in mind and you can start working on Uthum's introduction.