[quote=@Fetzen] Are there any further hints or explanations about what has been wrong with him or is this all the 'detail' I am going to get? [/quote] [quote=@Roman] I like the 'magick deadzone' idea. I don't mind a blood mage, if done in the right way. I'm not even against the idea of a renegade splinter-group from the Barbed Church, which I think is what may have been going on in your bio. Retain some of those elements and recycle them into something we can build together from the ground up, or pitch a new character, or if I've (rightly) upset you - and I wouldn't be surprised - tell me to shove it right up my ass. All very viable responses. [/quote] If you'd like to work with me to rebuild him, PM me. If you'd like to pitch a new character that we can work on from the ground up, PM me. If you want to tell me to shove it up my ass, tell me to shove it up my ass. I understand you're frustrated, but please don't be passive aggressive. [quote=@Liseran Thistle] [color=dda0dd]so like in my latest post Lowe says "y'all".[/color] [color=dda0dd]I'd like to start by saying I'm from southern Louisiana and have a very thick accent, but I think I've learned how to hide it over the years.[/color] [color=dda0dd]anyway, Lowe has a slight southern accent and no one will mention it.[/color] [color=dda0dd]like ever, even his sisters have it and no one in the church knows where it comes from but oh well.[/color] [color=dda0dd]is that cool?[/color] [/quote] 'Y'all' is a very regional slang term in reality and langauges across different realms doesn't develop in the same way. I would avoid modern slang and as much real-life regional lingo as possible. You may have a southern Louisiana accent, but Lowe is not from Southern Louisiana, nor does such a region exist in Vassidia. On a seperate note, if we're having large portions of back-and-forth dialogue in the IC, a Collab is preferable, to make the scene more organic and to lessen 'clutter', which isn't the right word. Essentially, there's no need to have 3 posts from 2 people with a paragraph and a half of dialogue in each of them and that's it, rather than 1 post worked out between 2 people that contain the dialogue in its entirety.