[quote=@Roman] If you'd like to work with me to rebuild him, PM me. If you'd like to pitch a new character that we can work on from the ground up, PM me. If you want to tell me to shove it up my ass, tell me to shove it up my ass. I understand you're frustrated, but please don't be passive aggressive. 'Y'all' is a very regional slang term in reality and langauges across different realms doesn't develop in the same way. I would avoid modern slang and as much real-life regional lingo as possible. You may have a southern Louisiana accent, but Lowe is not from Southern Louisiana, nor does such a region exist in Vassidia. On a seperate note, if we're having large portions of back-and-forth dialogue in the IC, a Collab is preferable, to make the scene more organic and to lessen 'clutter', which isn't the right word. Essentially, there's no need to have 3 posts from 2 people with a paragraph and a half of dialogue in each of them and that's it, rather than 1 post worked out between 2 people that contain the dialogue in its entirety. [/quote] Y'all isn't modern. It actually is a term that showed in great Brittan before the colonial era