[quote=@Zeroth]
Any suggestions to improve the writing/readability? Since he's basically the "wandering hero/swordsman" archetype with a Confucian/Zen/etc flavor, I made his answers roundabout and wordy, but the more I look at it now the more I wonder if it should instead be kept short and sweet like the quotations/parables he'll be throwing out?


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It's less how it's worded, and more just the clash with the usual style of how a CS is filled out. It's not a big deal, I just personally prefer the past tense/third person informative norm. I think you're fine; It gets across what it needs to, and nobody's asking more than that. (At least I'm not).