[b][COLOR=RED]***THIS IS NOT A NOTE OF ACCEPTANCE, THAT DECISION IS COMING TUESDAY/WEDNESDAY***[/color][/b] Okay, had some time to read, here's the dealio, it's on the shorter side and ofc it's nothing final and if you have further questions you can ask here or PM me. On the Right Track: [@Papa Baba] - We had already discussed things in PM. [@Sola] - If she could just have some kind of weapon (I did recall a mention of a frying pan which would qualify) then everything else is fine. It'd just be a lil worrying to go on an adventure empty handed! [@tex] - I thought he was a pirate but fisherman is just as good. As with Sola, I didn't see a weapon, either, but please correct me if I just missed it [s]I cant read[/s] [@Jensoman] - It's fine, if accepted I'll make sure to fill you in on the inner workings of the kingdom [@Inkarnate] - What a tsuntsun~ [@HowlsofWinter] - ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) [@Mara] - I can already feel myself banging my head on my desk. Could Use an Edit: [@deadpixel101] - I understand I left things open ended, but 'Mother' doesn't really count as a class, at least from the ones I had in mind. I'm looking for more traditional classes (Rogue, Cleric, Knight, etc., etc.,) and her class doesn't seem to fit the archetype, even though her abilities seem to fall under healer. On another note, the insectoid part I'm slightly wary about; I haven't introduced other races besides humans and as of this moment I don't really plan on it, so that would need to be changed. [@ShwiggityShwah] - This could be my own misunderstanding, but is her personality the part that's being parodied? The character looks a little straightforward, so I wasn't too sure. Also, yes there's a huge difference between a hunter (those that hunt) and a beastmaster (essentially a tamer of animals). [@Seraphin] - I'm not really seeing the parody here, he's an Inquisitor but...where's the quirk? Remember this RP is a parody, so it's not going to be too serious. [@Quasar] - I'm pretty iffy on necromancy, as I had mentioned to Pike, I don't feel that divine elements would really fit the tone I'm looking for, and while I know necromancy is...well, the complete opposite, I don't think such dark magic would be in the tone I'm looking for. If there are any questions and concerns, ask and ye shall receive. If I missed anyone, just say the word and I'll go back and review it. While I'm thrilled to see everyone's ideas, unfortunately not everyone will be accepted, but this weekend will be your chance to make any last adjustments and edits including those who are already on the right track (in case they want to add more to outdo their peers). Thanks for reading!