*Offers you one of my stuffed animals to hug.*

It all worked out! Well, I hope so, anyway. xD Since the pacing of a fight is really quick, it tends to make things a bit difficult in a post-by-post situation. From what I've noticed, you'll end up with either short, open-ended posts, or semi-longer ones and working around what is written. I mean, in the time it takes to read about a single action (depending on the description and reader's reading speed, I suppose), realistically, one could have likely completed a couple different attacks depending on the circumstance and character's skill and agility. It can take a couple paragraphs to describe actions that occur simultaneously, or near to it. A fight that takes four-ish pages to write about could be over in technically 30 seconds to a minute (rough gustimate. Never actually fully checked word-count to time-count... Aaaand that's been added to my "To Do" list).

In short, don't worry about possibly misjudging when to end a post. Just write what you want and are inspired to write. One way or another, it'll work out. If I ever can't work around something or one of my characters would interrupt and completely derail the rest of your post, I'll be sure to let you know! Just be sure to do the same for me if I do that to you! :-)

P.S. Your whole post was wonderful (love how Ghent responds and tries to talk Drust down), but this stood out to me: "Staring down at the dagger he managed to retain, Ghent's mind spun. He wasn’t a stranger to a brawl or two, but this was different. This was Drust. Armed or not, he didn't stand a chance." It, in particular, gave me happy reader shivers.